Wednesday, March 31, 2010

Nicole: Must. Do. 500. Words. Daily.

Oh boy, you guys are going to end up getting sick of me ;P.

Just posting to say that I now have 472 words in my first chapter! I know, I know, not very great but it is for me since I haven't written properly like this for months. I also wanted to say thanks so much for inviting me, I don't think I'd ever get any written if I didn't join.

So, I've decided that writing 500 words a day (or at least over these school holidays) is becoming a MUST! If I do, in eight or nine days I'll have most of my first chapter finished because I'm aiming for around 5000 words(: I've written around 300 words today, so I'll go finish that off and head to bed since it's 12:56 AM.'

EDIT: Finished for the day(: Ended up writing 813 words today. If you're interested in reading the first part, you can here:
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=ArJrtLhowwPtziky4vSPLt7sy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20100330225014AAvPkC2
I might be deleting it soon though.

- Nicole

Monday, March 29, 2010

Sarah: To Nicole

First of all, welcome girlie! So glad to have another member and see that SAAWAKM is growing!

As for your question:

When I get an idea for a story, it's usually not the beginning. My inspiration usually plants a thought in my head. It's usually about a girl (since I always write about girls) and some sort of trail she is facing. This is called your protagonist, but you probably already knew that.

Since my idea is not usually something at the beginning, I know I can't start right there. But that's okay too. I write down the initial idea, usually calling the characters "He" or "She". Once I have that, I read it and read it again until I can figure out just what type of person they are. I start to build them up in my head. Is she strong? Capable of dealing with this? How could she change? What about him? What does he look like. ETC.

I usually take notes at this point, and work through what characters are what. I also like to pick name at this point, because a name can make someone real.


As far as sitting down and ACTUALLY writing the idea, yes, then I start at the beginning. (This is usually several days, if not weeks, after the idea is planted in my head. I have to get the characters works out before I can write them. I have to know who they are before I figure out how to portray them on paper).

Of course, I get some great ideas along the way. When something like this happens, I open another word document or get out another piece of paper and write that out. This can be just a summary or an actual word by word event of what you would like to happen. I usually keep the extra document saved with my story, and have it open while I'm writing to see where it should fit.

When it comes to planning, I usually know what I want to happen. Sometimes, my story takes different turns, though, and goes somewhere else than where I wanted. When this happens, it is okay! That means that your characters are alive, and their own people.

As far as the people who told you to write roughly...er...well...that's not what I do. I try to get it as good as I can the FIRST time, and that way I don't have so much work in editing. Plus, if you go roughly, you might forget some important detail.


Kas had a great thought there. I do that too. If YOU write out what is wrong, then you can know what to fix. You have to think like your character. I also reccomend letting someone else read your work. If it doesn't make sense to them, then it won't make sense to other people!

I hope this helped you, Nicole. And all of you other SAAWAKM peeps.

~SG~

Kas: Something i wrote...


Okay, i just got finished reading Nicole's last post, Question, and i wanted to share something with you guys that i didnt plan on even writing.


In my fourth hour, Biology, i have a lot of spare time, its an easy class, so i get things done pretty quickly. Well, i had some extra time today, and i got to thinking about my novel. I've had a few people read the first chapter, and a few said it was either too short, or it lacked description. So i started writing what i wanted to try the next time i started writing, and this is what i got...
Keep in mind that no one was supposed to read this, im just typing it word-for-word from a page of notebook paper. So its all basically just a huge note-to-self kind of thing.

"I need a LOT more description. I need to show her feelings about whats happening. I have to close my eyes and imagine that im there, that im Her. I need to go through it scene by scene in my mind, and type what i would be feeling in her situation. No worrying about grammar or spelling just yet, i want only the thoughts and feelings."
"I want some physical description too. Whatdoes a certain tree look like, does it remind her of anything? Im going intot he dialogue and encounter with Silas too quickly. I need some backround so the readers get to know Carter better. I need to play the scene in my head, act like it was me, like it actually happened, and now its a memory. I need to write like im writing to myself, or in a diary to read later so i wont forget it. These characters need to seem real. Silas is my character, i created him, but for right now i need to pretend that all i know is what Carter knows about him. I know nothing but what he tells her or she observes. As i write, i will learn, and he will form into the person i created, or he will form into someone completely different, I can't decide for him. "
"Tyler doesn't exist exist to me right now, Carter doesn't know that he even exists. So he doesn't. I can't think about what happens in the future, because my character cant. She doesn't know about Tylaer, or that Silas is a Malkini. When im her, writing as her, those thoughts go away and i only know what she does at that point in the story."
I came up with this technique, but i have yet to try it. You all are welcome to use it, if you want. But i thoguht it would be a good answer to Nicole's post. I know a lot of that you wont know what im talking about, cause its mostly things about my story, but i hope you know what i meant...
:D
-K

Sunday, March 28, 2010

Nicole: Question

I'm having a little bit of trouble. The ideas are all there in my head and I know exactly what I want to put into my first chapter, but I just can't seem to actually write it. I've written about 200 words, there's just something that's stopping me from writing and it's getting quite frustrating.

So, when you're writing, how do you start? With the first sentence, or just write and then go back and edit it? Do you plan it, if so, how much do you plan? I've been told that I should just write roughly because I can easily come back to it later and re-edit it, but I can't really do that either ;l. It's so frustratinggg.

- Nicole

Nat: Spring Break!

Hi!

So I haven't been on in a while, and I haven't posted in a really long time, but now I'm back! Writing is going good, I'm still aiming for that 500 words a day. I'm on Spring Break this week, so I'll probably have lots of time to write. Yay!

I'm working on Chapter 5 right now (although the first 4 chapters still need a lot of editing), and I'm putting off all my editing until I finish the first draft. Yesterday I worked on designing a castle blueprint as a setting in my story, so that I could base some events around the layout of the castle, so that was fun.

It's so exciting that we're adding new members to SAAWAKM! I can't wait to start hearing from all our new members. Also: I think it's a good idea to start the Challenges up again.

Not much else to say, talk to you soon, wishing you all happy writing!

~Nat

Nicole: Ripped

Hi(: I'm Nicole, I'm a fifteen year old that's attempting to write a book. It's temporarily called 'Ripped' (for some unknown reason), because I'm not too sure what to name it yet. I haven't completely planned what's going to happen yet, so this is just what I think I'll be doing(:

It's basically about a girl named Audrey Ely, who's had a stroke of bad luck the last couple of years. Her younger brother, and one of her only living relatives left, passed away, causing Audrey to drift further away from the limited amount of friends she already has. This also meant that she was forced to deal with her bitter and inflexible grandmother on her own.

But when she meets Saben, it's like a fire is relit in Audrey. They have an instant connection and although he's reckless, she can't help but love the surge of adrenaline she gets from just being around him. Audrey finally believes that something good has come her way.

That's until she finds out that her bad luck is only just beginning. A war that has been brewing for centuries is now boiling over the edge at the prophecy that Audrey will bring the rise of one magic, and the fall of another. This will force her to choose between good and something she knows is right, or darkness and the love she never knew she could feel again.

That's about all I have so far(: and yeaah. You can read the first half of my prologue here: http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/chapter.asp?chapter_ID=40143

(:

- Nicole

Maiah: First Chapter Equals Complete!

Yay!! I'm so happy! I have officially (well maybe not officially) finished my first chapter! Again. Haha.

So please, pretty please with sugar on top, and cherry dumplings, go read my first chapter and tell me if you like it, or if i need to fix something or whatever. Honestly, I think it's total crap..but that't probably because I wrote it. Hahaha.

http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/chapter.asp?chapter_ID=33344
^^There's the link.

Go read it.
Now.
I command you!
I demand it!

Haha so please go read it, and tell me what you think! :D

-Maiah

Maiah: Abella

Yay! Alright well i'm really happy that we get to ask more people to join SAAWAKM! :D
Haha.

Okay well her name is Abella Aurlie, and she is really good at writing. In my opinion, anyways. Haha.

http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/chapter.asp?chapter_ID=34740

^^That's the first chapter of her novel. It's good. I couldn't stop reading haha.
Also, before SAAWAKM was completely set up, I told Abella about it and asked her if she was willing to join. But since we already had 6 people involved, she couldn't...
But that was like a month ago. So I don't know if she still wants to.

So let me know what you think!

P.S
She's a fan of Johnny Depp...so she's awesome. Haha

-Maiah

Kas: Sage.

Hey guys,
So Ned's cousin Sage is going to be the first candidate for new members.

I vote yes,

Here is some of her writing,
http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/chapter.asp?chapter_ID=40233
Ned says Sage wrote the first paragraph, and that she is really good at description. \

So, you guys read it, and then vote yes or no.
=D

-K

Saturday, March 27, 2010

Kas: weekly challenges?

What happened to our weekly challenges???

I know the last one that was posted wasn't really accomplished very well, but i don't know why we stopped? Haha. I say we start again!

Wasn't it Ned that did the last post? So Ned, you choose, who should create the next challenge?
I think Maiah, Sarah and Nicole (Who will be posting soon, we were having some problems with the invitation thingy on blogger) are the only ones who have yet to do a challenge...

-K

Kas: More??

Hey guys,.

I've been thinking about it, and the only reason we stopped at six members for SAAWAKM was because of the chatroom issues right? Well, seeing as we never use the chatroom, maybe we should invite some more people?

Not random people of course. Haha. I don't know if you guys know this, but most of you were in our favorites on WOP, thats why we invited you. Because we already knew that we liked your story and writing. So, if there are any people that you guys like, from WOP or anywhere else, that you want to invite. I think you should make a post, and include either some of their writing, or a link to where we can read it. Then we will have a SAAWAKM vote, and if the person gets the majority of the votes, then they're in!

This is all, of course, only if you guys want to. If you'd rather we stay at six members, thats fine. But i think it would be good to get a lot of people doing this with us!

If you like the idea/ hate it, comment this and tell me, if the majority like it, we'll do it! If not, thats fine. Haha.

-K

Ned- 'ello Poppet!


Sorry. Just finished watching Pirate's of the Caribbean, I love that movie. :)


Okay, so. My Cousin, and best Friend, (She was my best friend before she was my cousin. Long Story.) Sage, and I are writting a book together. You can find the first chapter on Worthy of Publishing, our pen name is Sage and Emily. I know. Creative, riiiight? If you could read it and tell me what you think, that would be AWESOME! It's called, Hello, My Name is Lucie. :) Another thing, what do you like more,


This...
























For the cover, or...



This?
Thanks a bunch! :)
-Ned

Friday, March 26, 2010

Kas: We Have A New Member!

Hello again.

We have a new member! Her name is Nicole, and me and Maiah know her from a while ago, she used to have a blog too. But she deleted it for personal reasons. But, i invited her to be in SAAWAKM a long time ago and she just wrote back saying she would love to!

So, once she sends me her email, i will be sending her an invite to the blog so she can get to posting!

Okay, thats about it for now, watch for her first post!

=D
-K

Thursday, March 25, 2010

Maiah: I Need your OPINIONS!

Well originally, in the first chapter i wanted Rose to have a flashback of when she first met Tristen. But now i'm wondering if the first chapter should be when she meets him.. you know what i mean? I just think it would be better. Haha.

So i'll still have the dream scene in the very beginning.

So I have two questions. Should I use this idea instead of what I originally planned? And also, when she first meets him, should it be how she meets him the the flashback, or should I have her run into him somewhere or something like that...?

Alright, thanks! :D

-Maiah

Wednesday, March 24, 2010

Sarah: Homework...and MONKIES!

So...

Yeah.

Not much to say, other than the fact that SCHOOL SUCKS. I've been getting TONS of homework and my biology teacher is ALREADY preparing us for finals. We have to do this new thing called End of Course Exams. You guys have them? It's totally dumb. They give us this huge, complicated test over a computer and then we either pass or fail the course. I'm like, freaking out over here! If I fail biology, I'll have to endure the torture again! AHHHH!

But anyway, about writing.

I've been writing like crazy lately. Don't tell my parents, but that's what I've been doing instead of homework. XD


And then I have to stay up forever to get the homework I was supposed to be doing done. Probably a bad idea. :(

Here's another random question (since I love these!):
If I walked up to you and gave you a monkey, what would you do?

~SG~

P.S. I NEED CHOCOLATE!!!!

P.S.S. Sorry, I'm a spaz...

Tuesday, March 23, 2010

Ned- SO Sorry!

Omg! I haven't posted in like ever! Sorry. I've been really busy. Like really busy.

Haha. My Mom just got hailed on. :) - Random.

So, Like i said (twice) I'm super busy. I have school stuff, writing stuff, friend stuff, family stuff. So I might have trouble blogging for a little longer.

i write every where. :) On my lap top. So... I don't really have a writting area.

So I've been saying so a lot.

I'm bored.

BYE!
xoxo
-Ned

Monday, March 22, 2010

Kas: School... =(

Well, spring break is over. :(

Time for school again. But, this means you guys can look forward to me posting everyday again! Haha.

So, i put the writing on hold for a few days. So i could write a full detailed outline of the novel. Up until now, i didnt know exactly what was going to happen in the story, but now i do! I finished it yesterday, and i am very, very happy with it. It actually ended up taking a few turns i hadn't anticipated before, and were kind of just spur of the moment things...

So, now all i have to do is write, write, write. and luckily i have a lot of time in my fifth hour to do it! Haha.

-K

Friday, March 19, 2010

Maiah: Grrr

Ugh. I've been so busy in the last few weeks. It's ridiculous.
Yesterday, I got contacts. Today I'm in my school's alice in wonderland play from 3-10 P.M. (I'm a crew member). Tomorrow is my aunt's wedding. Yeah...this has basically been my schedule ALLLL month. I'm about ready to shoot myself.

Well i have not gotten much done. To be honest, I haven't written anything since...the 16th. And it was only 306 words. So now my first chapter has a total of 916 words. And 610 of them are my "dream" scene. Haha.

Well tonight i'm going to try and stay up late and write more. Maybe i'll be able to fit some in tomorrow. Or Sunday...):

You all are meanies. My spring break isn't for another 2 weeks! Grr. School sucks. Just like your face. Haha no jk.
That didn't even make sense...lol.

Well that's it. This is just an update. I'll post a picture of my writing space tomorrow, hopefully! (:

Also...what happened to the weekly challenges?
Once I finish my first chapter, i'll let you know, and I'll post it on WOP, and you need to give me your feedback.! :D

-Maiah

Kas: Book Trailer!

Im making a trailer for my book!

Most of you probably dont know this, but im really good at editing video. Haha i sound so full of myself, but really, i went through like a three year phase where it was all i did.

So, i just had the most brilliant idea to make a book trailer for the novel! Yay.

Haha, well i just thought i would let you know, and i'll post it on here when i get finished... =D

-K

Kas: My Writing Space


This is my writing space. Right now its in my dads office, because im working for him, but once summer comes im going to convince him to move it into my room. His office is right next to our house, so i can use it anytime. :)

Things i cant write without:

1) Well, as you can see, i have to have a glass of tea (haha) and Cheezits!

2) My awesome little explosion bow i put on my speaker. ={D it makes me happy.

3) I always have word open, thats where i keep all my notes.

4) and i use a program called ywriter (Which i also got maiah using) to write everything.

Thats really about it, i dont use much to write.

I always have music blaring. And i listen to the most amazing music everrr. Haha

-K

Thursday, March 18, 2010

Nat: Writing Space

This ^^^ is the desk where I do all my writing, on our little laptop that I've pretty much claimed just for me. =) The things that I can't write without:

1.) The laptop (duh) because that's where all my Chapters are saved.

2) Paper and a pencil, because I take all my notes by hand and type them up later (if I have the motivation).

3.) My story binder. In it, I keep a typed copy of each chapter of my story, and at the back I have all my notes about the story, just to keep me organized.

4.) My iPod, because I usually listen to music when I write. I don't always, it depends on my mood. Sometimes I prefer to just write in silence.

5.) Some kind of food or drink. I can't write without some kind of edible item. Usually it's just a glass of water or a piece of gum, but sometimes I have chips or something.

I think that's about it...Yeah. And that is my writing space. =)

~Nat

P.S. Great idea, Sarah, to post about our writing spaces!

Sarah: My Writing Space



My Writing Desk!
Welcome to my family’s computer room! So, this is where I write. I figured I would show you guys, and then you could post it too! I don’t know, just a fun idea.
Thing I absolutely need while writing:
1) The computer. I write in notebooks or on random slips of paper too, but if I type it all up, it’s much more organized. (That’s Facebook on the screen, but shhh, don’t tell anyone. I was supposed to be doing a project! ;p)
2) A calendar so I can keep track of what day it is.
3) My phone, because if I get a good idea and there is no paper, I type it in a text and save t under drafts. That way I will have it for later.
4) A random school book, because I’m supposed to be reading it.
5) Pens, pencils, etc…I don’t know why.
6) A printer, because it’s attached to the computer.

Other things you can’t see:
1. Music. I always listen to music while writing. Without it, I’m hopelessly depressed.
2. deviantART.com I love this site! There are so many cool pictures, and I get inspired by them!
3. I usually am chewing gum when I write too, because it calms my nerves.
Anyway, I’d love to see your writing space! I guess if you don’t have a camera, you could just post the list!

~SG

Kas: Break!

Spring Break Baby.


So, its the middle of spring break, and i have gotten absolutely nothing done...
*Sad face*

I haven't had any time, today is the first day i've been home all week. But, i do have some time now, so im going to try to get something done... Sigh.

Haha. Well... thats just about it... :D
Yeah, this is a very short post... my bad.
Oh, and those pictures are me and my best friend jes. Their from this week, so i figured i'd include them. :D haha.
-K

Wednesday, March 17, 2010

Sarah: The Hermit that is I...


I woke up before noon today (I'm on spring break so this is a shocker), went out to lunch with my grandparents, went shopping with my mom, and spent the rest of the day soaking up the Vitamin D from the sudden spring that has sprung in the Middle of Nowhere.

Life is good.

I decided I needed to get out of the house and away from the computer because, well, I'm becoming a bit of hermit. So today I took in some sun and relaxed a bit.

No writing today though. :(

I'm working really hard though, trying to work through some stuff in my novel. I'm getting really excited for Dragon's Book, because it's getting under way.

~SG~

Tuesday, March 16, 2010

Nat: Not dead, just dead tired

Yeah, so I think I'm on the edge of getting sick, which would explain why I'm so tired all the time. Because I am terribly tired. I didn't fall asleep until 2:30 last night, and had to get up at 6. So I'm about to die. I'm definitely going to bed at 8 o'clock tonight.

But anyway, about writing:

I'm still working on Chapter 5, but I'm planning Chapter 11 at the same time, which is probably a little bit weird, but that's how I write: all over the place. My 500 words a day hasn't really been kept up, I'm just writing as much as I can in the few minutes I can find to write. Hopefully I can do some more writing over Spring Break, and on the next few weekends. I'd like to finish Chapter 5 by the beginning of April at the latest.

So I have to go do homework and then go to bed, I'm gonna say goodbye for now. Happy writing adventures, everyone, and talk to you soon!

~Nat

Monday, March 15, 2010

Ah.

Hi guys.
Sarah, I know what you mean, espeacially when you are sick, writting is very difficult.
I have been sticking to the five hundred words per day, but not going over. :( Yuk.

March Break!
I get a full week off for writting! But my dad's taking me Tuesday, Wednesday, and Thursday, on vacation, we're going around Toronto to different hotels. And Friday I'm going horse back riding. It'll be hard to write, but I will try. :)

Now, I must be off, I've got writting to catch up on,
TTYL
<3 you!

Oh, yeah.
Do you guys like Justin Beiber?
Sorry, doing a survey.
My oppinion him is I don't hate him, I like his voice but am not crazy about him.
:)

Kay, really now.
BYE!
-Ned

Sarah: No, I'm Not Dead...



So...

I've been really, really, insanely sick. Coughing, sneezing, and everything else that applies to being ill. I haven't been able to write that much either.

BUT!

I've edited and stuff and come up with more of a plot and more characters. It's just...all in my head. Now I have to write it. Don't get me wrong, I love to write. Sometimes though, it's so very difficult I want to scream.

Now I have 2 questions,
1) In my story there are two queens (the Ice Queen and Shadow Queen). Does that sound...interesting? Or just stupid?
2) If you had a pet dragon, what would you name it?

I saw Alice in Wonderland. Did you guys love it too? I thought it was amazing!

(That was totally random. I need to LAY OFF the NyQuil).

A side note: Just so you guys know, I'll be going to another country in June, so I won't be updating then or writing for nine days. Well, I plan on writing my brains out on the airplane, but I won't be able to update anything at all! I know it's a long time away, but I just wanted to let you guys know.

Anyway, that's about it I guess. My new best friends are Cough Drops and Tissues. I love you guys! And you SAAWAKM girls! TTFN!

~SG~

Sunday, March 14, 2010

Maiah: Oooh

I now have a formspring! Which is a place where you can ask people questions. SO yeah.

Here's the link:
http://www.formspring.me/MaiahhhRosex

So if you ever have any questions for me, then go ask it there!
And everyone on SAAWAKM should get one too. Why?

Because it's fun to answer questions. Haha.

Yeah so that's it. And I finished planning out all of chpt. 1 so far. Now I just need to write it..
*Sigh

And I think there's a SAAWAKM murderer on the loose, and me and Kas are the only survivers....
I hope that's not the case. Hahaha

-Maiah

Friday, March 12, 2010

Maiah: Noooo!

Crap. Guess what? I think I'm going to change my first chapter. I'm just not happy with how it turned out...
The one thing that bugs me about it, is that there's so much skipping around! It just bothers me. ARGHHH!

And now I want to just like totally re-write it and see how that turns out. But I'm stuck with that. But i just can't let myself move on and continue with chapter 3 now, because chpt. 1 is bugging me. I don't know how to start off my new version of chapter one. And I don't think that the nightmare scene is working out for the VERY beginning...
*sigh

Well if you could give me some ideas, that would be wonderful! Haha. Because I am totally stuck, and I'm seriously about to stab my computer with a pencil.

-Maiah

Kas: I need your help!

Hey guys,
Today during fifth hour, i started re-writing ch 1 so that it fit better with my new plot. :D

Only im not sure if i like the first one better than this new one. I need some opinions before i keep writing it, because i dont want to finish it and then decide i like the first better...

This is the first.

http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/chapter.asp?chapter_ID=34597

And heres the new one. Its not finished, its about half done, but i really need some opinions on what you guys like.

http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/chapter.asp?chapter_ID=38432

Okay, tell me what you think.
-K

Thursday, March 11, 2010

Maiah: Opinions Needed!

So I'm working on chapter 3. And I have 2,000 words done in it so far. Now I need your opinion on something. This scene comes in like the middle of the chapter, and I want to know if I should keep this? Haha. By the way, I'm going to post just the scene, not the enitre chpt. Just letting you know. :D

Aimee and I made our way through the cluster of cars toward Aimee's own car; until out of the corner of my eye I spotted a dark figure walking towards us. I froze mid stride.

Aimee whipped around to look at me. Slowly, she followed my stare. The tall street lights were out of range for us to make out any features but from the distance it looked male. Tall. Scary. He didn't seem to notice me and Aimee. Or least that's what I thought.

"Oh my-Rose!" Aimee shouted in a hushed ramble of words. "Do you know who that is? Dude, I was kidding about the whole stalking thing...." Aimee let out a nervouse burst of laughter. "Alright this is just weird. I seriously think that Tristen's stalking you now."

It was Tristen. Aimee yanked on my arm and hauled me into her car. We shrunk into our seats and tried to stay still as Tristen walked past the hood of the car. As he passed I recognized a flicker in his eyes, and I could see his eyes turn slightly toward our direction. A smirk crept across his face, and he looked as if he were laughing silently to himself. The black t-shirt he wore fit snuggly to his chest and abs. Long lean muscles fell from where his t-shirt cut off and down the rest of the length of his arm. My heart stuttered out a beat. Had he noticed me? Was that why he was smiling? Fear and anxiety rippled through me.

Once he passed, I let out an uneven breath, finally realizing that I'd been holding it. After another silent minute, Aimee spoke. "We should follow him. See what he's up to," She lurched up from her seat and popped open the car door. I gasped and grabbed her arm.
"What? No! Are you crazy?"
"C'mon, Rose. What's the worst that could happen?"
"Huh I don't know Aimee...maybe he might see us! Please let's just go," I begged her. Aimee thought for a moment.
"Well I'm gonna go follow him." Then she jumped out of the car and I watched her steps ascend toward where Tristen had gone. I bit down on my lower lip and then raced after her. Each step I took closer to the dark building Tristen had had gone into to, the beating of my heart grew louder. Adrenaline flooded in my veins. There was a slight ringing inside my ears. Stop! Rose, this is a bad idea, my brain screamed at me. This is dangerous! Stop! I said stop, why are you not stopping!? The words were left to echo through my skull.

Aimee turned to look at me when we reached the front door of the building, her hand already on the old doorknob. I observed the building with an anxious glance. It was completely dark and it seemed abandoned and dead. What purpose would Tristen have here? A smirk spread over Aimee's face and she held a finger to her lips. With a flick of her wrist she opened up the door. I gulped and followed her inside.

Just like the outside of it, it was black and old and run-down. Objects; poles, bricks, bars, hammers, sticks and saws, covered the floor, and were pressed up against the wall to make more space. Except on the inside, it looked more like a house then an old abandoned store building. I could see open doorways, leading into seperate rooms. A spiral stairway at the other end of the room.But there was nobody there....
A chill ripled up my body. We walked further inside the building. I let my fingers trail along the wall. "Aimee he's not here."

"Shh," Aimee hushed me. "Don't you hear the voices?" She whispered. I strained to listen for any other sound but my frantic heart. And then I heard it. Two voices coming from above.
"Yeah...it's coming from upstairs," I said quietly.
I tried to listen to what they were saying. It sounded like one person had said "Rose,". Then the next sounded like, "I could never do that to her." Tthe next was a different voice. It was harder and demanding.

"You have to. This is what we are, son,". I felt a tremor of fear shake my body.
"We shouldn't be here. We're breaking and entering. Oh my God we're going to die," My voice was edging toward hysteria.

"Rose," Aimee warned sternly. "Chill." She took a step forward, deeper into the building. The floor board cried loudly in response. The voices ceased and everything seemed to freeze. And in one quick moment, there were footsteps thundering down the stairs hidden in the dark, and Aimee was running for the door. I tried to run too, but I couldn't. I couldn't move. My shirt was stuck on something! I tried to pull away, and then there was a loud tearing noise. I felt the fabric of my shirt come slightly loose, I gasped. But before I could escape, there were two long arms on either side of my face, keeping me from running away. Tristen smiled at me, then shook his head slowly.

"You followed me?" I wasn't sure how to respond to that.
"I-No I...it's just that I-"
"You what?" I chewed on my lower lip unable to speak.
"I'm not following you," I finally said. "You're following me. Lately you've been almost every where I have."
"Oh and that can't be a coincidence?"
"No." I answered too quickly. I could barley see his face; covered with darkness. Where was Aimee? She probably left me, I thought. I'm going to kill her once I get out of here. I searched Tristen's black eyes for a moment. "Answer one question, and I'll be on my way."
Tristen's grin widened. "Not so fast. I have a question for you, myself," Tristen took a step closer so that our bodies were almost touching. "Why did you follow me inside here?"
"I-It was Aimee's idea." Tristen nodded his head thoughtfully, trying to compose his face but a smirk peaked through.

"Why are you here?" I asked. "What purpose do you have here?" I felt my shirt come even more lose. Shit. I tried to stay calm. Hopefully he won't notice if my shirt ends up completely falling off and I'm left in my freaking bra, I thought angrily.
"I used to live here with my mom before she died. Before they turned this area into an outdoor mall," I felt my chest swallow my heart.
"I'm sorry, Tristen," I said quietly.

"Don't worry. It's not your fault, of course. There's no reason to apologize," His face had gone serious. He looked down and a smile spread over his face. "Is your shirt," he cleared his throat. "Stuck?"

I felt my jaw drop slightly. "Uhm yeah. It's-I mean well it kind of...well my shirt kind of-"
Tristen chuckled and then pulled off his own shirt. The moon coming through the few windows hit his stomach and chest perfectly. I tried to look away. Tristen tossed me his black t-shirt and then continued grinning. I stared at him for a moment. "Could you turn around or something?" I finally prompted sternly.

"Oh, right. Sorry." He turned away.
I stripped off my tattered shirt and then quickly replaced it with Tristen's. "Okay, you can look now," I said. I observed the sleeves that went too far down my arm; the shirt was overall just too big. My legs felt weak, and my heart was thumping frantically. I was wearing one of Tristen's shirts. "I have to go," I said breathlessly.
He nodded; a smile still planted across his pale face. "Don't worry, Rose," He called after me, as I started to rush out of the old house. "I promise I didn't look."

Kas: Question.

Okay, so maiah is the only one of you guys who ever got to read the beginning of my first draft of the novel. Which we called "The Dream Scene." It got taken out of the story when i started over. And lately i've been having a lot of trouble starting ch 2.

So, i've been thinking about resurecting the dream scene, and making it the beggining of ch 2.

Do you guys think this would be a good beggining to ch 2?


I'd never seen anything more beautiful. I was standing at the edge of a high cliff, over-looking the sea, as the wind whipped my hair into my face. The sky was golden, glowing brighter than I’d ever seen. Although barely any light reached me now, as the setting sun stretched towards the shoreline. Every moment the world grew darker, and soon all the light would be gone, taking this beautiful sight along with it.

But it wasn’t the sunset I couldn’t take my eyes off of.

Standing in the shadows only a few feet in front of me was a boy, his dark eyes stared out at me from beneath the shaggy brown hair that had fallen into his face. He was close enough for me to touch, if only I reached my arm out fully, but I didn’t dare. The thought of reaching out into the darkness made me shiver. He seemed so familiar, but i couldn't figure out why. I could feel his eyes as he watched me, and I wanted to run. I wanted to go as far away from him as I could, but my feet wouldn’t move.

"Hello." His voice was low, barely audible over the splashing of the water. I jumped at the sound.
He took a step towards me, a smile stretching onto his face, and pushed his hair away from his eyes. They were black, empty, darker than anyone’s eyes should ever get. My whole body was screaming that this was dangerous, that I should run away from him. I stepped back cautiously, very aware of the high cliff I stood on.

"You know, you are very pretty." He said, taking another slow step in my direction, only this time the movement brought him out of the shadows and into the bright light.

His face changed instantly, it was no longer dark and haunting, but peaceful. I could see now that his hair was, in fact, a pale blonde, and his eyes, coming to life in the bright sunshine, had turned light green. There was no trace of the darkness that had filled them before. He was perfect. I sighed, all hints of worry had disappeared from my mind.

I took a step forward, reaching up to stroke his skin. I brushed my fingers across his cheek, it was soft. Smiling to myself, I moved my hand down to rest on his chest, the white t-shirt he wore strained against his muscles. Leaning his head down towards me he smiled, his white teeth glistening in the sunlight. I felt his hands as they wrapped around my waist, then slid onto my lower back. He pulled me forward, closer to his warm body. My face was so close to his I could feel his breath on my lips.

"I love you carter." His voice sounded softer now.

I looked up into his eyes, “I love you too."

Then all in one quick movement he closed the space between our bodies, and pulled my lips to his. My arms flew, instinctively, around his neck, and I pulled my self up towards him, crushing his lips to my own. Out of the corner of my eye I could see the sun as the last part of it sunk beneath the horizon, taking with it all the light.

The world went dark. Something was wrong. His lips were still on mine, moving slowly, but they were colder. I pushed away from him, to look at his face and almost screamed. The green eyes, his pale hair, it hadn't been real. He stood before me dark once more.

"What’s wrong?" He asked. His depthless eyes watching me, scanning over my body. I shook my head. He smiled, taking a step towards me. I backed up, but I knew only a few more steps would send me plunging down into the freezing water. His smile faltered, the look on his face quickly changed to outrage. He stepped again, this time moving much faster, and grabbed my arms.

"Why are you doing this?" He screamed into my face, tightening his grip on my wrists. I winced from the pain, I knew it wouldn't take much for him to break my bones.

I looked up at him, tears filling my eyes. He looked terrifying.

He brought his face closer to mine, "Answer me."

When I didn’t answer he pulled me forward, trying to bring my body close to his again. I had to take a step in order to keep him from touching me. I screamed at him to stop, but my voice was lost in the sound of the waves. I pulled back, trying to free myself from his grip, but he just
tightened it.

Again he pulled me towards him and I knew that one more step backwards, one more desperate step away from him, and I would fall. I pushed at him, but he just laughed... I felt his hands leave my wrists and move down to my hips. He kept his eyes on my face and then he pulled me towards him, this time bringing his lips back to mine. I jumped backwards, feeling the ground leave my feet and instantly realizing my mistake. I fell.

I slid through the air quickly, screaming for help. But I knew it was pointless, no one would save me, there was no one here. Looking down, I saw the enormous black sea. It grew closer every second. Taking a deep breath, I closed my eyes tight, waiting for the impact.

The water was cold and it hit me from every different direction, knocking the air out of my lungs. It crushed me downwards, sucking my fragile body deeper into the freezing water. Almost as if it wanted me to die here, to fall farther and farther, until all hope of escaping was gone. I tried to swim, to reach the surface, but was only pushed deeper into the depthless black water. Finally accepting my fate, I gave in, letting the water overpower me. The cold liquid filled my lungs and white spots covered my eyes. Everything went cold. It was all over. I thought of the mysterious stranger, his eyes, his lips before the blackness completely engulfed me.

I woke up, gasping for air. I had been holding my breath in my sleep. My body heaved with every inhale, and there was a sharp pain in the center of my chest. The sound of my heart beating pounded loudly in the back of my head. I squeezed my eyes shut, but I could still faintly hear the roar of the waves echoing in my ears. My mouth was dry and felt like cotton, but I could taste the salt from the water on my tongue. I sat up and my head immediately started screaming in protest. I started rubbing at my temples. It was only a dream, I assured myself. It wasn't real. I took a few more deep breaths, my heart finally slowing, and climbed off my bed.

Okay, well tell me what you guys think...

-K

Tuesday, March 9, 2010

Nat: The World in General

First off: Thank you to Sarah for those awesome and inspiring tips on writing/reading. =)

Second: My inspiration is back, thank God. It only took about a week of not writing (*gasp*) to get it back. But it's here to stay (for now) and I've already written 400 words in about half an hour. Yay!

Third: I have a dance competition this weekend, and I'm so excited!!!!

Fourth: Oh yeah. I'm having a lot of trouble with the challenge for this week. I've tried so many different ideas and ways of writing, but it's just not working for me. All well, I'll just keep trying!

Have a good day tomorrow! The week is halfway done!

~Nat

Sarah: CHYEAH!

Because I'm bored and these are fabulous:
First off, I want to say that the first one is not mine. I'm not sure who's it is, but it's absolutely fabulous.

TOP TEN REASONS TO READ JUST FOR THE FUN OF IT
10. Books don't get caught in braces.
9. Unlike gym, you don't have to shower afterwards.
8. Reading won't cause pimples. (YAY!)
7. It'll help you forget what they serve in the cafeteria.
6. Books don't "crash".
5. Graphic novels look good with whatever you're wearing.
4. It's cheaper than the newest video game (and sometimes free! check out a library!)
3. You can drown our your parents cheesy music with an audio book.
2. You'll learn words even your teachers don't know.
1. It'll confuse your parents.

This is one written by me and my friends:

THE 12 1/2 RULES OF WRITING
1. Writing has no rules. Anyone who tells you so is a failed writer.
2. If you write everyday, you'll get better at writing.
3. If it's boring to you, it's boring to the reader.
4. Poetry does NOT have to rhyme. In fact, rarely rhyme your poetry.
5. Don't do stereotypes. In real life and in writing.
6. Writers read. Writers read a lot. Writers read ALL THE TIME.
7. Make lists of everything. Your favorite places, words, names...etc.
8. Sometimes there isn't a moral to the story. It's okay.
9. Carry a notebook with you constantly. And a pen. Write down whatever inspires you.
10. If you've never done something, do it and then write about it.
11. Learn to tell both sides of the story.
12. Writing still has no rules.
12 1/2. Why are you still reading this list? I already told you writing has no rules. You feel silly now don't you? ;p

This last one is a random list of things that i love/frustrate me about writing. My comments on quotes.
1. "Writing is hell".
2. "Writing is hell". No really. No, REALLY.
3. "A writer is a person for whom writing is more difficult than it is for other people". Face it. You struggle more than bad writers.
4."Writing is socially acceptable form of schizophrenia". I know this from experience.
5. "Writing is learning to say nothing more cleverly every day". Ever had to describe an apple in full detail to someone who's never seen one before? I have. It's hard.
6. "Each writer is born with a repertory company in his head and as you get older, you become more skillful casting them". So, so very true.
7. "There are three rules for writing the novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are". See? Writing has no rules!
8. "Many suffer from the incurable disease of writing and it becomes chronic in their sick minds". Yes, I know the feeling.
9. "I always did my best in writing to Santa Claus, but I never thought of writing as something you did for a profession". I've wanted to be a writer since I was little enough to write to Santa Claus.
10. "Writing Saved me from the sin and inconvenience of violence". FINALLY someone who understands. tehe. I kid, I kid.
11. "Writing is still hell". Very much so.
12. "Writing is the only thing, that when I do it, I don’t feel like I should be doing something else". Okay, this one is very true for me. You know in The Notebook how Ally says "Most of the time I have all these thoughts bouncin' around in my head... but with a brush in my hand, the world just gets kinda quiet". Well, that's how it is when I write. Peaceful. The world goes quiet for a little while.

Monday, March 8, 2010

Ned- Eek!

Hi guys!
I have a bit of a problem I've been writing for the last four hours and now am stuck. I want to decide this now because if I don't I won't be able to foreshadow it.
If you've read my book, up till now that is, you'll know that Casper is having some boy trouble. x2. Both Nick and Darien, like her a bit much.
:)
But I'd like to pick who she chooses now. Originally I have it planned out that she chooses Darien, but now I don't know. Eek.
Nick is starting to grow on me.
I still really love Darien though!
Help!
Please!
Link if you haven't read it here.
http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=8278


Please help, I'm gonna have like a vote, so whatever you people, and a few of my friends choose. :P Thanks

-Ned

Maiah: MWAHAHAHAHA!

SOOOOO my inspiration is back! Eat that writer's block! Is that even possible?
...I have no idea.

But anyways ladies and horses, Maiah has great news for you today.. Well actually it's only good for me. But whatever. It's still great! Haha.

Well I'm having a plemenca guy attack Rose multiple times throughout the book. Great idea, huh? I came up with that idea yesterday. Haha. But the only problem was I had no idea why he'd attack her...
But guess what!? I figured it out! This mystery guy (Who is name Tre) will have released his toxin on Rose before. Except it didn't work. And like right after Tre does, Tristen releases his toxin...(Btw, Rose won't really even know Tre. She'll just have run into him once and that's it.)

Now because plemencas are so easily tempered, Tre will get pissed off that Tristen took his "lady", and so Tre will immediately hate Tristen and try to kill Rose....
*Put thumbs up and smiles really big

Soooo....yeah. And sorry if that's a bit confusing. It all makes sense in my head so it's all goooood!
:D

What does a caterpillar say?:

Mehhr

I'm so happy right now! And i have chapter 3, 4 and 5 planned out! (says in napolean dynamite voice) Yesssss!

Now my question of the day:
Should chpt. 3 begin with Rose at work, or driving in her car?

As you can tell, I'm very hyper right now. I just drank 2 cups of coffee...
So that should explain it.

Mwahaha.

-Maiah

Ned- Post about Posting

Hi guys! Okay, I haven't posted in a while so this is just letting you know I'm still alive.
-But- Won't be if I don't go out and walk my dog. It's beatiful out and my mom just might kill me if I don't. LOL.
BYE!!

Kas: AHH!

Okay, i've just had the greatest freaking idea! Haha!

So, if you guys have read my first chapter, then you know who Silas is. Well, i've decided that i want carter to fall in love with Silas. Maiah, your the only one whos going to know what im talking about, haha. So everyone else, just bear with me please.

Okay, you know Valon right? Well im thinking that he is still going to be in the story, but he's not goign to be as major of a part as he was before.

Edit: sorry, my stupid ass comp. teacher made me get off blogger. Douche. Anyways, as i was saying, Carter is going to fall in love with silas. Maiah, your the only one who knows the entire story, so you can probably figure out why thats a problem. Haha. I dont know why i didnt see it earlier, its like perfect. Haha. Okay, well thats all i have to say for now. ={D

-K

Kas: Aye!

So, my muse is still lost, but i've been putting up flyers and leaving him treats, so hopefully he'll return soon.

So yesterday, my computer crashed. I screamed. Its freaking amazing that i decided to post it all on WOP or i'd be starting over... again.

But all my notes, and word pages are lost forever. =...{(

I'll just have to deal i guess. So, i went to see alice in Wonderland twice this weekend, And it got me thinking about the level or freak-tasticness in my novel. I have realized there is not enough! Haha. I love all things strange and weird, so im going to try incorporating some more of that into the story.

Right now im still stuck in the middle of chapter two, with my muse missing i haven't been able to write much lately, so i just keep editing what i already have, and its starting to sound pretty good. Whats really kind of cool, is that i have been keeping up with my 500 words! Haha. I've been looking at how many words i have in ch 2 before i edit, and then when i check again after, its always more than 500 words longer! I just thought that was neat. =)

Okay, well thats really all i have to write about.
-K

Sunday, March 7, 2010

Nat: Poetry and Song-Writing


Hello!


So it's kind of weird (but so am I, no surprise there), but I haven't been able to write my story lately. I'm in the middle of Chapter 5, and I know where it's going, but I just don't know how to get there. It's quite frustrating, because I was going so well for the past few weeks, and now my inspiration is gone. Grr. But that isn't what's weird.


The weird thing is that I have been able to write poems. And some of them aren't half-bad either. Which is strange for me, because I've always been a horrible poet. I'm actually really happy with the few poems I've written (although most of them are really sad).


I'm thinking about attempting to write a song. Which is another thing that I'm terrible at. (Trust me, I've tried many MANY times). But I have an idea for a song, and I think I might pursue that idea for a while, take a few days off from my novel. What do you guys think? Good idea, bad idea, okay idea?


Question: What kind of music do you guys like to listen to? I'm looking for some new stuff to listen to, wondering if you have any suggestions? If you have a favourite song or favourite artist, let me know, please!


Another question: Do you guys ever get tired of waiting for love? I'm sorry, this is a random question, but it's been on my mind for a long time. It probably sounds dumb, but I'm so sick of seeing everyone else finding their perfect boyfriend or whatever, and it's driving me crazy! Sorry for that random rant. =)


Okay, I think that's all...Yeah, I'll let you know if I think of anything else. Thanks for listening (or reading).
~Nat

Sarah: Another Chappy-Chap!!!

News from SG:



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*Pants heavily from screaming excitedly for so long*

I'm sorry, but guys...I'm so excited! I've written another chapter and...IT'S AMAZING!

I love it so much, and like, I don't even know why. But, I just realized where everything is going and how it's gonna get there. All because of one chapter! Words cannot express my giddness over this. I'm litterally smiling like a fool and giggling like a school-girl. My family is starting to wonder about my sanity...

2. I have a question about a school project: I have to pick a famous person from another country and do a report on them. Problem? I can't figure out who! I've been thinking about the Beatles, but I'm not sure if that counts 'cause, ya know, they're more than one person, so...

Who should I do my report on? There's not too much of a rush, because it's due the 22, but if you could please help me out, I would appreciate it.

3. My spring break is next week. Not tomorrow, but the week after that! This means I'll be able to write like, everyday for a week. So I'll be posting more, and (hopefully) fast.

4. Question: Alright, I'm just asking this because I'm curious. If you were trapped on a desert island, would you rather have
a) one friend, a week's supply of food, and a first aid kit
b) enough food to last a year, a first aid kit, and a clean fresh water supply.
c) a whole group of friends.

IDK where that came from, but I would choose the first one. After all, you can boil the not clean water to sanitize it. And a week's supply of food, yeah, we could deal. We're both tough as nails [(me and the friend I would choose) and okay, maybe not that tough] so we would totally make it. After some freaking out, fighting, and crying that is...


Let me know what you've been up to!

Maiah: Quick Question

So Rose is getting a job. Should she be a...?

Waitress? Or should she work at a swimsuit shop, and be a cashier or something?
Any other suggestion?

I just can't decide. Haha. :D

-Maiah

Saturday, March 6, 2010

Maiah: Challenge Two


She:
It wasn't love; not in the usual sense.
She loved him because of what had happened.
His girlfriend's death
His suffering
That was why she was in love with him.
She felt the need to care for him, and ease his pain.
When all she was doing was digging them both deeper.
I love you, she told him. She cringed at her own response.
She was lying.
His girlfriends death had brought them together.
She felt a strange attachment to him. Which really,
Nobody could really decipher.
There was an invisable string tying them together. Unable to break or split or snap.
He made her wear and dress like how his girlfriend used to.
He'd make her listen to the same music.
Eventually
She'd become "her".
She wouldn't be herself anymore. And this had been the boys plan all along:
Change this poor innocent girl into something she wasn't.
And once she finally realized what he was doing, and her heart tore apart
He wouldn't care.
And once he realized it himself, rage surged through him.
He hit her.
Her beat her.
She cried and moaned and begged him to stop.
He didn't care. He never had cared for her.
He had only used her
to fill the throbbing ache in his heart.
Soon he'd move on to another girl and do the same thing.
Violet wrists, and burns covering her arms.
And she would be left to mourn and scream and suffer.
Alone...
He:
The wound in his heart was too large. Blood oozed from it.
He missed her so much he'd do anything.
His girlfriend was dead. Missing.
Is that what it was? Missing?
She was gone. Lost somewhere, though he wasn't sure where.
He wanted her back more than anything.
Then he met somebody else.
Once he noticed how willing, and how heartsick she was to watch his pain
He made her fall in love with him.
And she already felt so bad for him that she would never tear herself away from him now.
In his time of need.
Then slowly, he began to change her.
He gave her band t-shirts; the kind of bands his girlfriend had listened to.
He made her do, and watch everything that his girlfriend had.
He was changing her into his own little puppet.
He controlled her.
She had no option but to take and follow his orders.
She was trapped.
Though he soon realized that this poor girl wasn't his girlfriend.
She never would be.
His girlfriend was dead. He couldn't change that.
So out of his anger he beat her. He shoved her and smashed her head into the walls.
Her sobs and screams almost made him feel better.
It was comforting to know that there were other people out there
That felt pain and that suffered,
Besides him...
-Maiah
P.S Sorry if any of that was confusing at all. Haha. I wrote it in like 10 minutes. :D

Friday, March 5, 2010

Nat: Wanted - Inspiration!

Please help! I haven't written anything for a long time, I'm nowhere near my 500 words a day. Although, this week has been really rough in more ways than one. =(

I promise, I'll keep trying to write, but if anyone has ideas on how to get inspired, please share with me! Thank you!

Ned- Callenge Three and more! lawl.

Hey Guy! It's Ned, so I actually have a few thing to say,
One. Thank you Nat, for letting me create the next chapter.
Two. I know all the poems aren't up yet but Nat, Sarah, they were AMAZING! I cryed for both! And I usually don't cry, they were that good! :)
Okay, Three. I'm thinking we should do something a little different. So, The Challenge this week is a little harder.

So. Out of the list of morals bellow, The challenge it to wirte a short story to go along with it.
You know, like when we were in kindergarten and our teachers would read us those kids books that would have a moral to it.
Try to make it original.
Okay, Here are the morals.

A false tale often betrays itself.
Clothes do not make the man.
He who shares the danger ought to share the prize.
Men of evil reputation, when they perform a good deed, fail to get credit for it.
Once bitten, twice shy.
One cannot be first in everything.
Revenge is a two-edged sword.
The remedy may be as bad as the disease.
Those who assume a character which does not belong to them, only make themselves ridiculous.
Those who betray their friends must not expect others to keep faith with them.
Those who love practical jokes must be prepared to laugh when one is made at their expense.
Without the effort the prize means nothing.
Oh gawd! I didn't even realize it was in aphabetical order until after it was written. There is something wrong with my brain.
Any-who
It should be at least 500 words.
So, Yeah, can't wait to read them!
Four. I'm gonna try and raise the amount of words I write a day. Next week I start. The point is that I want to have at least two pages written a day. :) So I'm gonna try 1000 words a day. This sould be fun.
Okay Bye Guys have fun WRITING!
-Ned

Sarah: Challenge Two

Okay, okay...here is mine. It's actually over 500 words, because I got a little carried away. Ahhh...yeah.



SHE'S ALWAYS BEEN THERE


She stands with you,
And your ‘friends’
And your idea
Of being ‘cool’.
She knows this is
Just a phase,
And it too, will pass.
She recalls memories of
When she was seven
And you were nine.
Hide and seek.
You always knew she was
Behind the shed,
But you let her hide anyway,
Just to make her feel better.
She remembers when
You first let her into
Your ‘No Girls Allowed’ tree house.
The neighbor boys teased,
But it seemed you didn’t care.
Her mind is flooded
With thoughts of Cowboys and Indians
In the summer heat.
You always let her play the hero.
You were always older,
Stronger, better than her, it seemed.
Someone to look up to.
“Best friends,”
You promised her then.
When she turned sixteen,
She wasn’t a little girl anymore.
She saw the way your arms
Were strong, from the
Many hours of work on your
Uncle’s farm in the summer.
Her eyes searched yours
To see if you felt the same way.
To see if you didn’t want to be
‘Best friends’ anymore.
You didn’t feel the same.
Instead, you sought
The girl with bleach blonde hair
And a ‘smoking bod’.
The one who wouldn’t
Give you the time of day.
Her heart ached every time
She was around you,
But she smiled anyway,
Waiting for you to see
Who was right for you.
She stood by your side
When your father passed.
She was the first to offer
A hug and comforting words.
She calmed you as you cried,
The only one to ever see your tears.
She listened as you talked about
Future plans and goals,
Imagining herself in them.
Graduation day,
She was the one who cheered the loudest
When they called your name.
Her camera flashed as they handed you
Your ticket to the future.
At the wild party afterwards,
She danced with you and
Finally told you,
“I love you.”
You smiled, but you didn’t
See it the same way.
Your first day of college,
You felt like crying again.
That afternoon,
You called her, about to break down.
She listened quietly,
And showed up
With your favorite chocolate chip cookies.
They reminded you of home.
But you didn’t see
The way she stared at how grown up
You had become.
In the months to come,
The separation didn’t change
Her feelings for you.
Christmas break,
You saw her as she helped
Your kid brother build a snowman
In your front yard.
You saw the way the sunlight caught
Her face, the way her hair shone.
You saw the way she joked
With your mother, laughed
With your aunts and uncles.
The way she fit in perfectly.
You started to think about everything
You two had been through together.
You started to think
About that graduation night
When she whispered
“I love you.”
In your ear.
You thought about how many times
You had made her cry,
And when she wiped away your tears.
You realized, you didn’t want to be
‘Best friends’ anymore.
She caught your eye and
Stared with a questioning look.
“What?” She asked, perplexed.
You smiled and across the loud table
Right there in front of everyone
Said, “I love you.”

Nat: Challenge Two

His Angel
By Nat

Daddy, I’m scared, she says
And he knows his heart is breaking
What kind of father was he
That couldn’t even protect his own daughter?
I know, sweetie, he answers
Daddy’s here, it’ll be okay
Looking at his little girl, who’s all grown up now
He thinks back to the day she was born
He’d never seen anything so beautiful
A little angel wrapped in pink blankets
And she only grew more beautiful with each passing day
The most outgoing girl with the golden curlsAnd brilliant smile that could make him melt
He remembered
Her first day of Kindergarten
How excited she’d been
And how hard he’d struggled to hold back the tears
Teaching her to drive
Struggling to keep his patience
And the feeling of pride when she got it right
The day of her first date
Trying to help her find the perfect thing to wear
But he’d never really been a fashion expert
Prom night
Dress and shoe shopping for weeks
Watching her come down the stairs
Looking so much like her mother
How she’d breezed right by him
Into the waiting arms of her date
The sense of loss as she waved goodbye
Now, seeing her wasting away in this hospital bed
All he could think about was
How hard she’d been fighting,
Fighting to beat the cancer
That was breaking down her defences
And more thoughts flashed by
The things he’d never get to see her do -
Get married
Have children
Go to her 10-year high school reunion
Have a 50th wedding anniversary
Parents shouldn’t have to do this, he thinks
I shouldn’t have to watch her suffering
But he holds a brave face
For the sake of his daughter
Daddy, she says again I’m scared
And he knows that she doesn’t have long
It’s okay, sweetie, he tells her
He doesn’t know where his courage comes from
But something gives him strength
Daddy, she whispers, I love you so much
He buries his face in her hair, tears flowing like rain
I love you, too, he whispers
She looks up bravely, tears pouring down her cheeks
Don’t worry, baby girl, he tells her
There’s no time in heaven
I’ll be there in a minute
Her eyes close for the last time
Her hand still caught in his tight grasp
He can’t believe how much strength she has
How strong she is, and how brave
And even though she isn’t wrapped in pink blankets anymore
She still looks like an angel

Ned- Challenge Two

In Mom's High Heels
By Ned Flow


She'd run around the house and pretend to be a princess
Wearing beautiful dresses and Mom's high heeled shoes
She had no problems, No worries, No stress.
She'd use all Mom's makeup and expensive perfumes
Play dress up with the boy next door
They'd slay dragons and fly on witches brooms
They'd have
fun all day
Playing pretend games
and he wouldn't go home until the sun went away
As they got older the games changed
but their love for each other stayed the same
their ages changed too, the scenery was rearranged
In preschool it became boys versus girls
But they wouldn't follow those rules
Playing and spinning in swirls and twirls
In first grade they were accused of liking each other
They turn to those kids and asked “You don't like your friends?”
To which the others could not answer, they just looked confused at one another
in second grade he went to overnight camp
but he wrote everyday
and sent it in the mail with an envelope and stamp
In third grade she got very sick
so sick she had to go to the hospital
But he visited her with flowers and entertained her with his ninja kick
In grade four his dad left him and his mom.
He was angry and sad
She helped him stay happy, helped him stay calm.
Grade five was the year of grad
“What dress will you wear?” The girls would all ask
“I don't know, it's at the end of the year!” The girl shook her head, they all made her mad
Grad came
and grad went
it wasn't that big an event.
In grade six he joined the drama club, He told her to join too,
It was lots of fun!
So many wonderful things to do!
In grade seven they went to there first dance
He asked her to go with him
She smiled and said yes! What romance!
In grade eight they were put in two different classes
She got braces
and He got glasses!
In grade nine they went to a special arts school
In the end of the year play he play Romeo, and she, Juliet!
They had the school convinced they were super cool.
All through high school they dated
They were BFFs through it all
They grew to love this friendship they had created
And when they got married,
both successful and wealthy,
inside of her, his daughter she carried.
Now their child is born and she runs around the house pretending to be a princess
Wearing beautiful dresses and Mom's high heeled shoes
She has no problems, No worries, No stress.



Okay, so I'm not a very good poet. :)
It was really fun!
Oh yeah it's 441 words.
What word did I choose? I think I want people to guess, to see if I did any good at all, so, put you guess in the comments, and also, tell me if you liked it! Thanks.
Am I early? I actually think I am... Oh well, better then late, I'm just bored.
Hope you liked it!
-Ned

Kas: Alright ladies.

So, its the weekend! Haha.

And i have officially lost my muse.
I dont know where he could be.
I saw him yesterday, he helped me write around 700 words.
But today, he's M.I.A. (Missing In Action)
={(

And i have no inspiration to write... like at all.
I tried... but nothing.

I miss my Muse.

-K

Ned- Day OFF!

Whoot Whoot! Yeah, so I have today off, Lol, Cause of report cards. So Yeah.

I'm gonna write all day! Whoot Whoot!

Music I'm litsening to right now- Can't Stand It- NevershoutNever

Random!

Thursday, March 4, 2010

Nat: Correction on Challenge Two

I wrote yesterday that it has to be 500 words, just wanted to let you know, that was a typo. It should say 300 words, your poem only has to be 300 words. Haha sorry about that! Good luck anyway!

~Nat

Wednesday, March 3, 2010

Nat: Challenge Two!

Hello everyone!

So I finally came up with a challenge. Sorry I haven't been on in a while, it's been a crazy few days! But I have an idea for a challenge.

Last week we wrote a poem about ourselves, without restrictions and rules. So this week it will have a bit more structure. Your poem has to be 500 words, and it has to be about one of the following words:

Honesty
Justice
Love
Truth
Compassion
Courage
Destiny
Empathy
Freedom
Remembrance

Haha, I know it isn't a great challenge, but it's what I came up with. It might be a little bit difficult, but no one is expecting perfection. =)

These challenges are all about helping us to become better writers. So I guess we'll see what everyone comes up with on Friday/Saturday. Good luck!

~Nat

P.S. I'll let you know who gets to pick the next challenge on Saturday. =)

Sarah: Because I love chocolate...

Okay, this is for when you get writer's block. It may sound weird, but when pages mock me with their blankness, I bake. I've been doing a lot of this lately. My family is going to get fat! :<

Aw well, they can deal. I was flipping through cookbooks, brownie batter in my hair, cookie dough under my nails (I'm a messy cook) when I stumbled upon THIS! GAH! They were so...delicious. I ate three all by myself (this coming from someone who doesn't really eat that much)!

So next time you're feeling down...make these and be happy for hours. I made them at four, and I'm STILL smiling.

Recipe:


Directions:

FUDGY PEANUT BUTTER CHIP MUFFINS

Ingredients:

* 1/2 cup applesauce
* 1/2 cup quick-cooking rolled oats
* 1/4 cup (1/2 stick) butter or margarine, softened
* 1/2 cup granulated sugar
* 1/2 cup packed light brown sugar
* 1 egg
* 1/2 teaspoon vanilla extract
* 3/4 cup all-purpose flour
* 1/4 cup HERSHEY'S SPECIAL DARK Cocoa or HERSHEY'S Cocoa
* 1/2 teaspoon baking soda
* 1/4 teaspoon ground cinnamon(optional)
* 1 cup REESE'S Peanut Butter Chips
* Powdered sugar(optional)

Directions:
1. Heat oven to 350°F. Line muffin cups (2-1/2 inches in diameter) with paper bake cups.

2. Stir together applesauce and oats in small bowl; set aside. Beat butter, granulated sugar, brown sugar, egg and vanilla in large bowl until well blended. Add applesauce mixture; blend well. Stir together flour, cocoa, baking soda and cinnamon, if desired. Add to butter mixture, blending well. Stir in peanut butter chips. Fill muffin cups 3/4 full with batter.

3. Bake 22 to 26 minutes or until wooden pick inserted in center comes out almost clean. Cool slightly in pan on wire rack. Sprinkle muffin tops with powdered sugar, if desired. Serve warm. 12 to 15 muffins.

Ned- Kelley Armstrong

Hey guys!
I have an amazing story to tell you! Though, you might not get it.
Okay, here it goes.
My favourite author of all time, Kelley Armstrong, came to Toronto yesterday, my mom knows how much I love her and took me to see her. She was shooting a episode of eTalk, a t.v show, and when she was on stage she was looking at me.
She smiles and mouths I love your shirt.
I pointed at me and she nodded.
My shirt was a shirt that had to do with my favourite trilogy, written by her.
After the show, we went to get our books signed and she pulls out her briefcase looks at me and says, I'm guessing you heard about my new book The Reckoning?
I nodded and she pulls out the first printed copy and asked what my name is.
Me: E....E....E....
My Mom: Emily!
Me: Right! That!
Kelley: and how do you spell that? E.M...
Me: (Said as fast as you can imagine) ILY!
Kelley: Now, Alright Emily, Because I love you shirt this is for you.
She hands ME the book!
My can't breath almost fainting, hyperventilating,
My BFF: OMG You have no idea what this means to her
My other BFF: This is the greatest moment of her life.
Me (In tears!) Oh. My. God. (Whispered)
BFF#1: That's thankyou in Emily speak.
BFF#2: Emily! Take the BOOK!
Kelley: (Laughing) One thing you have to promise me? No spoilers. I can't stand spoilers. Please
Me: (Still unable to talk.) Nods excitely.
Kelley: Cool, here.
Mom: Pictures.

So yeah, I was the only one to be given it and let me tell you, the looks on the fan behind me, priceless! The book doesn't come out until April and if you have read the first two- I'm sorry, I promised, no spoilers.
If you haven't read them, guys I highly suggest you do. They are awesome!

So all in all, My life was made amazing yesterday.

-Ned

Kas: CANDY!

Haha. Yea, this is really random... so prepare yourselves.

I have a friend, who shall be referred to as 'Secret source' who just told me about this reall amazing thing.

Im not telling you what it is though... yet.

Right now, i just have one question.

What is your favorite CANDY?!?!?!

It can be anything, and you can have more than one. Just name off all your favorite candies and put them in the comments.

Dont ask. Just do!
Haha.

-K

Kas: Hello Ladies.

I did warn you that you would be hearing from me everyday at this time. ={D

And so here i am again!
Haha.

Alright, i really dont have much to talk about today, so i guess i'll just update you on the novel.

Okay, well i've just started getting into the groove of things again, and i've been doing my 500 words a day (Mostly in this class)

I had about 1500 words in Ch2, but my computer deleted it. Dont worry, i am planning my revenge. So now, i have around 500, but i haven't done todays 500 yet. So hopefully, i can get 500 done this hour, and then i'll have 1000.

Yay!

Hopefully you guys have read my Ch 1, because i dont want to type all that happened in it... So, I started ch 2 with her walking to school, and i finished the 500 words yesterday with her just getting to class...

So, i haven't gotten far, im expecting this chapter to be around 3000-4000 words, (Almost twice ch 1!) Haha. Only because there is a lot more information given in this chapter.

I know im probably boring you to death right now, and im sorry.

Also, i cant wait for the new challenge this week! So nat, hurry and post it! Haha.

Hmm... Alright.

-K

Tuesday, March 2, 2010

Sarah: Writing Action...?

Hello fellow writers!

So, I'm sitting here, typing away at my story. I realized how hard it is to write action. It's easy to watch it in a movie, but to write it...insert shudder here.

I was wondering if you guys have any advice? I really need help!

Thanks!

Maiah: I Need Your Help!

I am completely stuck on how to start chapter 3...
So I need your help with something..

My first question:
Which I idea do you like better?

1) It starts off with Rose babysitting a six year old named Zack, whos dad passed away the year before. (It'll be friday night)

OR...

2) It starts with Rose in her first hour class. (Tristen has that class with her) It will probably be Thursday or Wednesday

My second question:
What should Rose's first hour be?

Gym, photography, biology, math, azure (Which is a class I created hahaha), etc....?

Thank you! (;

-Maiah

Kas: Ello Goven'a

So, as those of you who follow the SAAWAKM youtube accout probably already know, i haven't been keeping up with my Vlogs. =..(

It started when my camera broke a few weeks ago, and i couldnt make them, but i got a new camera and i still haven't managed to keep up with them...

So, im deciding to just start making them like two times a week, one on wednesday and one sunday. Those seem to be the only two times that i can find any free time anymore. Just thought i'd let you guys know. ={D

Also, i'd like to say that i was very impressed by everyone's poems. I loved every one of them, haha. Very good first challenge. ={D

Hmm... im also going to start trying to do alot of my writing in my fifth hour. I have nothing else to do... And like i said, very short on the free time lately. Also theres only like five ppl in this class, so its pretty quiet. So hopefully i can get some work done, i'll have to email all my novel stuff to myself though, so i can get to it from this comp.

Okay, i dont have anything else to talk about...

-K

Monday, March 1, 2010

Nat: :)

Hi everyone!

This post is just to thank Kas for letting me pick the challenge this week, and to tell you all that I have no idea what it's going to be yet. So wish me luck, and happy writing everyone!

~Nat

Sarah: Chat room?

I read the chat room times..
Since everyone is probably in different time zones, do you think we should settle on one to write the schedule in?
So is it Mondays 7:00 and Fridays 5:00 Eastern? Western? Mountain Standard?

Sorry, just want some clarification.

Thanks,
~SG~

Sarah: Challenge One




I know it's late, but here is my entry for Challenge One.
She…
She is a dreamer.
With eyes so dark
People think they are black.
A lover, not a fighter.
But she will defend
What she loves.
She waits with blind hope,
That her prince will come.
She can hold a grudge.
Words are her friend,
But also her enemy.
Because she knows from experience
Once they are said,
They cannot be taken back.
Believes in learning from the past,
So she can have a better future.
She wants to be perfect,
But knows she cannot.
She fears failure more than anything.
Believes in God,
More than she believes in anything,
Or anyone else.
People love her,
And she can’t figure out why.
She wants to breathe life
Into a dead world.
With every breath,
Her heart hurts,
From memories of loss and hate.
She tries to live in the moment,
Because that is all life is.
A series of moments,
Strung together to create a lifetime.
Her lifetime.

Kas: Poem

Alright, i know its a bit late... sorry.

Kas


Labeled as many things,
Only she knows who she truly is.
Her best friend is her savior
And her father her role model.
She spent her life in the shadow of a sister,
Thriving to be the center of attention.
A hard worker,
But very easily distracted.
Always pushing herself for more,
Never satisfied with “average”
With a taste for the unordinary,
And a love for all things unique.
Intrigued by the past,
Afraid of the future.
With a smile for everyone,
But a very short fuse,
She knows who she is,
And what she wants.
The highest standards you’ll ever find,
Never willing to settle.
Hates to waste time,
For she knows she’ll never get it back.
Her biggest fear is of the ocean,
and her greatest dream to travel the world
Curiosity, her biggest weakness,
But also gives her strength.
Wanting to roam the unknown,
And experience something new,
Something beautiful…

-K

Kas: School...

Meh. I hate school.

But the good news is, we just started a new trimester, and guess who had computers last hour??
Me!

Haha, and seeing as im so amazing with my super awesome ninja computer skills, that i tend to get all my work done for the week in about twenty minutes... no joke. Lol.

So, you guys should be hearing from me quite often (On weekdays) becasue this is about the only website not blocked by the school server. Meh - again.

Alright, now to othe rmore important buisness. I've just realized that when i type these posts im saying them in a pretty cool voice in my head. So if you would like to get the full effect, read them in a really deep man voice and every few seconds switch to a really squeaky one.

I would also like to tell everyone that from now on, my smiley faces will have a mustache.

={D MustacheLove<3

Okay, now, im done being strange for a few moments, and i can tell you what i started this post for in the first place....

I have decided that it would be best, for us to switch off every week on who creates the challenge! Yay! Haha actually it was nat's idea, i stole it. ={D

So, since Nat came up with such a brilliant idea, I am giving this week to her! ={D

So Nat, the challenge this week is up to you, im thinking we should try to give everyone like two days to work on it, so try to have it posted by like wednesday or thursday. AND DONT SCREW IT UP! Haha. jk, you can screw it up if you want to.... ={D

Oh, and dont worry i havent forgetten about this weeks challenge, i just dont have my poem on my comp. It should be posted shortly...

And, i should tell you this before i forget to, SAAWAKM is now officially not sending anymore invites out, becuase only five of us can be in the Chatroom at once, and we have six members... Oops. Haha

But, the official members are, Me, Maiah, Nat, Ned, Sarah, and Nicole (Who you guys haven't met yet)

Alright, i think thats all i have to say for now... Maybe.... Hmm...

Yep, thats it.

Oh, and if anyone has any idea how i can get a sombrero on my mustache smiley i shall love you forever.

={D

-K