Wednesday, April 28, 2010
Nicole: Yes, I'm dead.
Nat: Procrastination and Distractions
Plus, I have a whole bunch of your stories to read on WOP, and they're so good that I can't stop reading. And now I'm posting this and eating MiniEggs. (Yum!) So basically, this homework will never get done.
Well, I just wanted to write and say a few things.
1) I think it would be cool to invite a guy to join our group, I was thinking about this a few weeks ago. I'm just not sure if we could find one...But if someone does, that would be sweet!
2) Are we still doing weekly challenges? I think Ned might have been in charge of the latest one? I'm not sure...
3) I'm doing a monologue for drama class, and I'm really excited and nervous, but I can't pick which one I want to do yet..I'm torn between 3 options. I would ask for your opinions, but they're hard to describe without you actually reading them.
4) I don't think there's actually a fourth thing for me to talk about.
Oh wow, I am so overtired it's not even funny. Sorry if this post is completely random and strange, but it's because that's how I'm feeling right now. I need summer vacation, like NOW, or I might go insane. Argh. Okay, I think I need to go to bed. I don't know what time it is wherever you are, but here it's almost 10:30 (which isn't that late, I know, but I was up til past midnight last night, and had to wake up at 6). And now I'm pretty much just rambling on about nothing, so I should probably go before I can bore you anymore.
TTFN,
~Nat
Maiah: Don't wake me cause I'm dreaming, of angels on the moon
And second, i know it's strange for me to be saying this now...but I'm so glad that me and Kas started SAAWAKM. I'm so happy that we have all of the members that we do, and i love how here, we can just be total couch potatoes and talk and write about our books. Hahaha.
This has really inspired me to work on my novel more, having all of the SAAWAKM girls get together and encourage each other. So I just wanted to say that, no matter how totally lame this sounds right now. Haha. But hey, it's true!
Anyways, I was wondering where everyone was at? It seems like everybody died. And now my suspicions of a SAAWAKM murderer on the loose is back! Lol.
So I've come up with new things for my novel. And i think it's going to fit nicely into my current plot. (:
MY QUESTION TO YOU:
What if we asked a guy to join SAAWAKM..? I think that would be pretty awesome. Haha
-Maiah
Sarah: Keeps?
Basically, these kids (ranging from ages 16 to 22) have powers over certain things. For example, my main character Infinity has power over Time. These powers are called Keeps, which makes the people who bear Keeps...(dun duh DUH!) Keepers. Hence: The Time Keeper.
Anyway, I need other ideas for Keeps. My protagonists counter part is the Keeper of Shadows, but there are three more, and I can't figure out what they should Keep. Love? Light? I can't use darkness because I already have shadows...
If you have any ideas, please help me out and leave them below! I'm at the point where I have to write these characters in and I need to know what they Keep!
Thanks!
P.S. COLORS!!!
Monday, April 26, 2010
Sarah: Time Keeper
Sorry about The Misadventures of Bandit Jones ending...but I'm a paranormal JUNKIE, so I knew it was too good to be true that I had a story about humans. :(
My school is ALREADY taking finals! And we don't get out until the 24th! They are teasing me with this! I keep thinking school's almost over and then..it's not.
Sorry, that was totally random.
Anyway, please check out my new and improved page and, of course, look into The Time Keeper.
Thanks all!
Kas: Im not dead... yet
I got my wisdom teeth cut out Friday and i've been in so much pain for the last few days its ridiculous... Im most likely not goign to school for a few days, and seeing as my computer is in my dads office, which is pretty far from my bed, i wont be on the comp either... :(
Im still really hurting, and im not quite sure when i'll be back, right now im pretty jacked up on pain killers, so im a bit loopy. :D
But i do have a funny story for you guys....
So, on our way back from getting the surgery done, i was... well i was pretty gone. First, when they were done with the surgery they put me in this room to like rest until i could walk again. My dad came in and sat by me and i tried to get up and walk, he tried to get me to lay back down, but i told him no that i was fine, so i got up... and walked into a wall. Then, they gave my dad this little white bag with stuff to take care of the holes in my mouth in it, and we got in the car and i wanted it, he wouldn't give it to me cause he thought i would break the stuff, so i literally wrestled him for it. I won. And i did break one of the little things...
Then, we were driving home and i was looking in the mirror and i saw that the doctor had cut my lip, and i was like "He cut my lip! That bastard!" Haha. Theni started making faces at people in traffic. Oh, and we got behind this truck that was like flinging dirt everywhere and it made it sound like it was raining, so i was like "Is it invisible raining?" and my dad was just like, no kas. it is not invisible raining.
Haha. And then we went to get me a milkshake and my pain meds were starting to wear off, and the girl gave us the milkshake and was like ahve a great day, i just looked at her and was like go to hell. And my dad drove away laughing. Haha
I dont actually remember any of this, my dad told me it all. I was so completely gone....
HAha, okay well i'll be back ina few days, but for now im goignt o go sleep. :D
-K
Sunday, April 25, 2010
Nat: 1,858 Words!
A trailer + a guitar + a friend + the guy you like = an amazing night! <3
I had so much fun! We talked and sang and wrote a song. =)
But anyway, the real reason I was writing...Um, I don't remember anymore. Oh yeah! I've written 1,858 words today, and I'm still going! I'm back to working on my original story (I can't make up my mind about which one I like better.), and I started writing part of the end. It turned out better than I expected, and I made myself cry, haha.
I also have a question for you guys. I have to name 2 'organization' type things in my story, the good side and the bad side. I was originally going with the Latin names 'Fatum' and 'Eventus,' but they don't seem to be working. If you have any suggestions, that would be really awesome!
Bye for now!
~N.a.T.a.L.i.E.
Saturday, April 24, 2010
Sarah: Ah-ha
Everyone's starting new stories! And, well, so am I. I really thought I was going to finish The Misadventures of Bandit Jones, but I don't think I'm going to. Sad, sad, I know. I'm actually really upset.
But I got another idea! YAY! I'll be changing my page in a few days, so be on the lookout for that.
Here's the cover!
Maiah: Prolouge!
http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=8000
^^Link
I promise, it'll only take like 2 minutes out of your life to read it, and comment on it! So please go read it. Please!
Oh, and today i'm gonna go read everyone's story and give you feedback since I have nothing to do today, and I haven't done it yet. Haha. So bye!
EDIT:
And I just changed a lot in my first chapter. so when you have the time, could you read that? That would be even more amazing! Haha. Alright sooo...bye! Again!
-Maiah
Friday, April 23, 2010
Nat: Wynn or Lose
Check it out, if you want to.
Not too much going on with me. I had a really awesome time with my friend today; basically we just ran around in the rain and acted really immature. (I love the rain.) I thought I would share that with you, just because it was so much fun! And today I also discovered the boy who gives the best hugs. =)
Um...I had something else to say, but I totally forgot, so I'll let you know if I remeber it.
"Unique is good. You don't get harmony when everyone is singing the same note."
~Nat
Maiah: Ohh wow. Hahaha
ME: I SUCK at spanish
CORY: Haha. Como te lomas
Me: Uhhhh
CORY: Como se dice
Me: Ehh...what?
CORY: Como estas
ME: OOH! that means that you don't understand! Am i right, or am i right?? Haha
CORY: ...no.... it mean's how are you
ME: Omg wow. Like i said...I suck!
Hahaha. Yeah...I just had to post this. Hahaha.(:
~M
Sarah: *spinning in a circle and singing about books*
I'm pretty sure we all do, but anyway...I wanted to give some recommendations based on what I've been reading lately:
1. Shiver
2. Winter's End
3. Peeps and So Yesterday
4. Maximum Ride
Those are the most I can think of right now. There have been more, but I just can't think of any. AND...I'm sick, so I shouldn't even be on the computer. Enjoy those, though!
Thursday, April 22, 2010
Maiah: BLEH!!
So camp was fun. And my counselors (Chad and Steve) were awesome! Haha. The activities were amazing, and they fed us until our stomachs were literally on the verge of exploding. Hahahaha.
Except....IT WAS SO EXHAUSTING! I'm tired, sore, dehydrated, sunburned, cranky, bitchy, stressed, sick, and im about to throw up. Bleh. So bare with me!
Well it looks like we've all been pretty busy this week, since there hasn't been like any posts. Haha. Well tomorrow i have school off, but i'll probably be sleeping the whole day. Then from 5-11 tomorrow night, i'm going to my friend Heather's party.
So I'll probably pick up on my writing on saturday. (:
Well anyways, bye! I'm gonna go to sleep. Haha.
Zzzz
-Maiah
Sunday, April 18, 2010
Kas: Woah, i almost just posted my full name as the title... ?
So Ned, go ahead and invite Lany, and i'll invite the girl i posted about a week ago. I still want to do the whole voting thing, but it seems like we can't get everyone to vote anymore, so just this once we're just going to invite them.
Also, i've realized that Sage has yet to post again, and i was wondering why?
Ummm.... oh! and Sarah showed me a realllyyy cool website called Inkpop.com. Some of you mgiht have heard about it, some of you might not have. Its a lot like WOP but you get a lot more feedback. And if people like your books they can add them to their pick list, or their watch list, and at the end of the month the top five books that have been added to the most pick lists are submitted to HarperCollins publishing house! Isn't that awesome! Haha.
Anyways, thats about all i have to say.
-K
Nicole: Storyy.
Saturday, April 17, 2010
Nat: New Story!
My dream actually turned into a story line, with a plot and everything. (The prologue is the thing I posted a few days ago.) It has a main character, and her name is Aubrey Rowan. I've given it a title, but it's subject to change. For now, the story is called Wynn or Lose. =)
Although I think I want to keep working on my other story, too, because I've come so far that I can't really give up now...
That's all I really have to say. Other than the fact that I'm doing an Ultimate Scavenger Hunt with my school. I'm really excited, but it's a lot of hard work. If anyone knows where I can get a zamboni, please let me know...
~Nat
Maiah: Poem
Ned- Lany
So, I said this before butonly Nat commented so I'm not sure if like anyone else voted, or read anythingg, but for the longest time I have been reading and LOVING the story Wolves by a girl who calls herself Lany on WOP. I love her story, so here's the link
http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=4312
So, yeah. Vote, and then if its a Yes, I'll invite her.
Just a question, has anyonee ever voted No?? lol.
Okay, so, IF im incharge of the challenge, which I might not be... The challenge would be to write a short story about the past of one of your characters. Like, short short. :)
Kay, BYE!
-Ned
Sarah: This is a Re-Post, Baby!
1. Did anyone officially invite Lany?
2. Who hasn't done the challenge yet? Since I don't know...erm...NED! Your turn I guess!
Another random picture!
Maiah: DREAM!!
But I still remember some of it! Yay! So as soon as I woke up, I jumped up from my bed and got a pencil and pen to write what i remembered down. So this is EXACTLY what I wrote. Maiah style. Haha.
Well first I'd like to say that Tristen is going to look different than I had origianlly thought. he now looks like a guy that I know. His names Hayden. And I've pretty much based Tristen off of him. So this is what Tristen now looks like.
Maiah: Challenge Five
Well to start off...I absolutely hate making speeches in front of people.
Many things make me confident.
I'm most confident when I'm in an enivornment that I'm comfortable in.
When I'm confident, I'll run around with my hair looking like a haystack.
I try not to be affected by what people think about me.
Friday, April 16, 2010
Nicole: The Rush
Sarah: If I turned into a zombie, would you still, like, hang with me?
I have two questions:
1. Did anyone officially invite Lany? She's been reading my book since I posted it on WOP, so if no one has, I'll let her know. She's super cool!
2. Who hasn't done a challenge? Who has? I need to know so I can assign it!
Thank you!
P.S. The title and picture...I'm in a random mood.
That's a party hat on his head!!!! See, I told you I was randommmmm...
Thursday, April 15, 2010
Nat: Challenge 5, Confidence
~Nat
Sarah: What Makes Me Cnfident
What Makes Me Confident
I can be a bitch.
Or rather, I can be
Perceived as a bitch.
Sorry for the harshness,
But it’s true.
I tend to speak my
Mind rather harshly,
Mainly because that
Brain/mouth filter
Most people have…
I seem to be lacking.
(If you find it, tell me okay?)
I’m not necessarily mean,
But I say what a lot
Of people keep in their heads.
This is why what makes
Me really confident is
Speaking my mind and debating.
I love to argue my point to
Where a person knows they’ve lost.
I tend to be really,
Really good at it too.
Some people, when they
Get up in front of
Their class, get
Nervous and shaky.
Not me.
I embrace that feeling
Because I know that
I am confident
And that I can
Persuade people to take
My opinion very easily.
So now, as I wait
For the teacher to call
My name and hold my
Persuasive essay in my hands,
I think about confidence
And how I feel at that moment.
I get up and move
Toward the front of the room
As the room goes quiet.
Twenty five sets of eyes
Stare at me as I
Prepare my speech.
“What makes me confident is…”
Maiah: well hello there sexy person i've never met before..
Please ignore the title...Hahah
So I want to give you a heads up that next week i'll be gone.
No computer. No phone. No NOTHING!
GUHHH!!
No, i'm not grounded haha.
i'll be at camp (it's for school...i have no idea) sooo yeah. I'm leaving monday morning and coming back thursday night. Annnd i have friday off! (:
So hopefully when i come back, i'll be able to pick up on my writing and everything.
Also, my challenge might be a day late. Sorry...haha.
Yeah...this post it pointless...
GOT A PROBLEM!?
Haha sorry, i'm kinda hyper.
Grr.
-Maiah
Wednesday, April 14, 2010
Nat: A Dream...
I needed to write a post, because there's this character that's been in my mind for a few days now, and I can't quite figure her out. She actually came to me in a dream a few nights ago. I have a really clear image of her, and I know that she has a story to tell me, but I just don't know what it is yet. (Sorry if that sounds crazy.) Last night in bed I wrote about her, and this is what I ended up with. I wanted to share with you guys, because I'm really curious about her and where she'll end up. =)
Tuesday, April 13, 2010
Kas: On to the next one.
http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=9724
Tell me what you guys think!
-K
Sarah: Another New Bee
You can read her story here:
http://inkpop.com/projects/15599/the-new-life-of-jude/
We're also thinking about getting together and writing a book called Crashing on Lightning, but she has to get her computer fixed first. That's another thing, she won't be doing any blogging yet, but she will be soon!
Just wanted to ask!
~SG~
Sarah: Look, Ma, I'm bloging...
Maiah: Ehhh.....I'm stupid..
Post a comment below if you have. Lol. I seriously don't remember.
Also! Yesterday I spent almost 2 hours editing my first chapter. there's a lot more description and it's a little bit longer. So if you could please go read it on WOP...that would be amazing! And sorry if you've read it like five million ga-gillion times so far and your annoyed with it. I am too. Haha.
http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/chapter.asp?chapter_ID=33344
Link^^^
Alright, well that's it! Soo...Bye! :D
-Maiah
Monday, April 12, 2010
Nicole: Research is cool, yo.
Sunday, April 11, 2010
Nat: Writing, WOP and Glee!
Second: This update is completely random, but I felt like I hadn't updated in a long time, and I needed to reconnect with the SAAWAKM world. I don't have much to say, so bear with me.
Third: Oh! I forgot to tell you! Do any of you watch Glee? Because I do (and it starts on Tuesday!!!!). I'm really excited for Season 2, but my cousin has front row seats to Glee Live in Phoenix! I don't know when it is, but I might (*fingers crossed*) be going with her. For a ridiculous amount of money, but hey, it's Glee!
Fourthly: I've been trying to read all of your WOP books, and I'm trying to comment on them all. So I should be doing that in the next few days, and when I get home I'm going to post a Chapter or 2 more of my book. =)
I don't think I have anything else to say...oh, I lied, yes I do. Who is in charge of Challenge 5? Okay, thanks for reading, talk to you soon!
~Nat
Kas: Sydney...
Okay, to edit your personal page, go to "new post" or just try to create a new post, and when you get there, there should be the words New post, Edit Posts, Edit Pages, and Comment Moderation at the top in blue letters. Click "Edit Pages", and your name should be in the list of pages, click edit on it and your good to go. You can add pictures, different colored text, etc. Be creative!
If you have any problems with that, try clicking on your name on the main SAAWAKM page, and it will come up blank, but you'll see a samll yellow pencil on it, click it and you should be able to edit your page, but i'd suggest the other way first, because im not sure if that works for anyone else but the creator of the blog...
-K
Maiah: Quotes
Is like trying to remember someone you never met.
-Love can sometimes be magic, but magic can sometimes...just be an illusion.
-Love is like air we breathe
May not always be seen, but its always felt,
Used and needed.
All about Sydney.
I like to text, however its not an obsession. I'm writing two books at the moment, one is called "When all is Lost", and the other is called "The Prince and the Peasant". You can find them both on worthyofpublishing.com. I hate waking up early, and my favorite season is fall. I love reading romance books, but my favorite movies are scary. I think this is all you need to know about me for now, so I'll stop writing.
Kas: Twins?
Im not positive on his name yet, but i love the name chase.
He is going to be Callum's twin! Haha. I always wanted twins, but i never really created them, so... haha.
I really like this idea, so now there are five boys! :D
-K
Saturday, April 10, 2010
Kas: Challenge Four.
His life had always had just one purpose… one mission.
It was his responsibility, his reason, his destiny.
But that was until he met her.
He knew, that his life had meant nothing before her,
And without her, he wouldn’t survive.
They grew closer, but he knew they still had a fight ahead of them.
He could sense the others getting closer and knew confrontation was close.
Then they arrived.
He convinced them he had not lost his way.
His mission would soon begin.
So they left.
But he didn’t know others had overheard.
They took him.
He fought them, but could not escape.
All the while her face swam before his eyes.
He felt her grow farther and farther away, until he could no longer feel her warmth.
That was when he began to darken.
They brought him deep within their dungeons.
Whips and knifes struck at his body,
But he was already in more pain than they could imagine.
He had lost her.
The weeks grew longer and she consumed his every thought,
Appeared in every dream,
Hauted his mind.
Eventually his body became numb,
From the pain, from everything.
They questioned him daily,
And they grew more frustrated with him every time.
But he could not give them what they wanted.
And then she was there, a mere ten feet away.
And the fire within him relighted.
He could feel her again,
Her warmth filled his body,
And he felt her love coursing through him,
But it wasn’t a love for him that consumed her.
It was for the one she came here with.
He looked into her and saw the other,
He saw every moment they had shared.
Another's body close to hers,
Another's eyes staring into hers,
He could see it all, everything.
Another's arms around her waist,
Her hand wrapped in the other's,
Another's lips grazing her for the first time,
The pain ripped through him harder than anything he had ever felt.
It almost made him fall.
She began towards him, but he stopped her.
They would destroy her like they had him.
Like she had.
The tears in her eyes spoke for her,
And he wanted so badly to hold her.
But he couldn’t.
They left him crumpled in his cell,
The cold walls seemed to close in on him,
Suffocating him.
She came to see him,
And he felt it wrong for a person as warm as she to be in such a cold place.
She tried to explain,
But he could see all that had happened.
She loved the other,
But he could also see that deep within her she still felt love for him.
And he became determined to bring her back to him.
No matter what it took…
Tyler James Rush
His life had always been a secret.
His family staying hidden,
Away from prying eyes who asked too many dangerous questions.
They could not be discovered,
Without being destroyed.
His brothers were his best friends,
They had been with him through it all.
He never needed anything, or anyone, else.
Until her.
Her smile was welcoming, but her eyes were lonely.
He needed to know her, to understand her.
And as he became her friend, he saw her open up.
They were together always,
Her blue eyes full of something,
But he didn’t know what.
He grew closer to her than any other.
He loved her.
And then she discovered his secret.
The one thing they had tried so hard to protect.
They were not mortal.
He expected her to run away,
He was a monster.
But she didn’t.
She vowed to protect him, protect his family.
Because she loved him too.
But they were discovered,
And summoned, to the mainland.
To accept their fate.
But there, they found so much more…
Carter Elizabeth Edwards
Her life had always consisted of the same.
The same Country,
The same Home,
The same people.
She hated it.
Being mortal was a curse in her eyes,
Something she could never escape.
She was damned to live in the one place she truly couldn’t stand, for the rest of her life.
She hated it.
And then he came.
He saved her, more than once.
He was what she needed.
He was there for everything.
And she truly loved him.
There were signs,
Signs that he was different.
But she didn’t care.
And then she could no longer deny it,
They were here.
She listened to him speak with them,
Convince them he had not changed.
It all confused her,
And when she asked him, he would not tell.
She was afraid for him.
Then he was gone.
And she saw that he had told her was a lie.
She was hurt,
Crushed,
Barely able to breathe through his betrayal.
But she had to,
And so she did.
It got better,
And soon he was only a distant memory.
Then they arrived.
The boys.
She grew closer with them all,
But there was one inparticular.
Tyler.
She grew to love him,
And they spent every moment together.
Soon the other was completely absent from her mind.
And then she discovered them,
For what they truly were.
Malkini.
She let him explain,
And vowed to protect their secret.
But they were discovered,
And summoned to the mainland.
She was frightened,
But knew he would protect her.
But could she protect him?
She didn’t know the truth she was soon to discover.
-K
Sarah: ah-ha
I thought this was GREAT!
Lookie:
Many people hear voices when no one is there. some of them are called mad and shut up in rooms where they stare at walls all day. Others all called writers and they do pretty much the same thing.
-Margret Chittenden
Funny, right?
So, for an update, I thought I'd make a list, since I need practice because Bandit LOVES lists.
1. I could really go for some chocolate.
2. My novel is coming along swiftly, but I'm trying not the rush it. Actually, it's quite complicated now, because she and Midnight are being bitter enemies even more bitterly and...yeah. For more, go here: http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=9685
3. I have 57 days until I go to France. I'm bouncing up and down over here. You can't see, but I am.
4. Princess and the Frog was an EXCELLENT movie. If you like fairytales and love and frogs and the south, watch it. I laughed through the whole thing. ;)
5. Yes, I do still watch kid movies.
6. My town's name has officially been switched to The Middle of Nowhere.
7. Not in THE Middle of Nowhere, but in a Middle of Nowhere nearby, someone I know was killed. :(
8. I'm going to be an aunt in June!
9. Is misadventures even a word?
10. My computer almost crashed! I just about died in my computer room! My parents were like, "Why are you freaking out so bad?" and I said (or rather, yelled), "BECAUSE MY WHOLE LIFE IS ON THERE!"
11. Wow...that's sad, isn't it?
That's about it! How have you guys been?
~SG~
Maiah: Challenge Four!
I also have something extra! It's a little quote-type thing that I wrote. :D
In Corara, it seems like those who you trust, and love the most
Always turn against you. And when the ones you come to turn to,
Turn against you...
You end up having to face everything alone.
It's you against the world.
Anyways...let's begin!
Nathaniel Chase Taylor.
He planned to destroy her.
He planned on hurting her
And killing her.
That was how it began.
....
He watched as she started to fall for him.
She began to fall for the fallen.
She fell into his dark, lichen green eyes.
And she couldn't pull herself out.
He was amused by this:
A silly mortal in love with a fallen angel.
But he couldn't deny that he was too.
Yet he tried to convince himself that he wasn't.
There were two problems though.
One, Tristen. Nathan could see the rage in his eyes.
The pain and twisted agony.
Tristen wanted to kill Nathan.
And he wanted to hurt him in every way possible.
And two...his secret.
Rose didn't know what he was.
He is an angel.
And not a guardian.
He is among the fallen.
Rose is told. But not by Nathan.
By Tristen.
The pain on her face is unbearable to watch.
And Nathan feels a shock of guilt shoot through his body.
She sees
The thick scars on his back. Where the wings used to be.
And she wants to scream and run away.
But instead she just turns away
And ignores him.
She wants nothing to do with him.
Nathan saves her from her death.
He can't help himself.
Even though he knows that he shouldn't.
It would be better if he didn't.
He's her guardian angel now.
And you'd think that everything would end up like a fairty tale:
They live happily ever after...
But Tristen wants to destroy Nathan.
He wants to hurt him in the way that Nathan has hurt him.
And he's willing to kill the one thing that holds Nathan's world together,
and the one thing that he loves-
and the thing that Tristen once loved himself...
Rose.
Tristen Hale Kouilos.
Never, had he completely accepted who he was.
A plemenca.
On his tounge, it felt like a bad word. Like a curse.
It seems like that's what it is.
A bad, horrible curse set upon him.
It feels wrong to him,
To be doing this to Rose.
To force her to fall in love with him.
And than afterward, watch her die from an overdose
Of the toxin.
Just like his own mother had.
He has the darkest eyes.
A bottomless pit of hell
All on it's own.
The blackest of all eyes.
Darker than anyone's should ever get.
Is it power, in his eyes?
Pain?
Sadness?
Fear?
A rush of danger?
All he ever wanted to do
Was make his father proud.
His father: The king of plemencas.
So he fights to accept who he is.
He kicks himself for ever caring for Rose.
He is who he is. He's a plemenca.
So that is what he'll be.
Dangerous, scary, evil, a threat,
A monster that you'd see in old horror films.
That's who Tristen is.
A monster....
Rose Matilda Carson.
With long, sprial curls spilling down far past her shoulders
And the brightest...
Most blue eyes you've ever seen.
She seems to live in a fairy tale story.
Still wishes on a shooting star.
Not letting the truth touch her.
She has a strong belief in angels.
And most people find it silly
How her head is always high up in the clouds.
"In the Angel zone".
She's only serious...pretty much never.
She's more of the quiet type.
But she knows how to defend herself
And her friends.
Aimee and Porter.
A fear of trusting people.
She holds a barrier up around herself.
Making sure that only the most
Trustworthy people are allowed
Inside.
Her fear began when her father left.
He abandoned her, her mother, and her brother.
Then her best friend seemed to completely
Change on her for a few years.
And just when her fear has come to fade,
She meets Tristen. And her world-
And everything around it-
Comes crashing down.
Into the horrible,
Indecent
And sad truth
Of reality.
..
Her fairy tale, is now gone.
And truth, has washed into her world.
Friday, April 9, 2010
Nicole: Should I give Saben an Irish accent?
Thursday, April 8, 2010
Kas: We have a new member!
I've sent her all the account info and stuff like that on WOP, So she should be posting soon!
Oh, and my challenge 4 might be a bit late... ahah'
-K
Tuesday, April 6, 2010
Nat: Approximately Challenge Four
He is the blonde hair and blue eyes that I love.
He is the smell that reminds me of summer.
He is the model of indecision, optimism and energy.
He is my inspiration, my strength, my everything.
He is better known as just Jude.
Jude, who wears Converse -
Jude, who plays football and guitar -
Jude, who is energetic and irresponsible.
The best friend that I never had -
The big brother that I wish I did -
The one that I’d spend my life with -
If he’d spend his with me.
I know more about him than anyone else in the world.
His sisters are his world,
His parents are his strength.
He has a heart of gold and a pure soul
But he’s on the wrong path.
His biggest weakness is his yearning for power -
He’s addicted and can’t resist the feeling it brings.
He doesn’t know what to do with his life.
He is easily angered.
He has to be the best at everything.
And has the messiest handwriting I’ve ever seen.
I can get lost in his eyes -
Their blue is as deep and wild as the ocean.
I can’t stand near him without longing to hold his hand,
Or feel his hair beneath my fingers.
My first love, and my last -
His real name, Julian, means ‘Youthful,’
And he is.
Lively, adventurous, ambitious -
Everything that I’m not.
He pulled me out of my shell,
Forced me to test my limits,
And expand my boundaries.
That’s the kind of person he is,
Always ready to shoot for the stars,
But not yet ready to take me with him.
I know that he doesn’t feel the same way.
He’s too handsome, too cool, too popular -
To fall for a girl like me.
I’ll just have to be content
To gaze at his perfect smile -
To hear his musical laugh -
To listen to his voice -
Always longing for more.
Longing to feel his hand in mine,
His arms around me,
And his lips kissing mine.
I know that he can’t love me back,
But I do know exactly who he is -
He is the blonde hair and blue eyes that I love.
He is the smell that reminds me of summer.
He is the model of indecision, optimism and energy.
He is my inspiration, my strength, my everything.
And to me, he will always be just Jude.
For Jude –
Love Katelyn
I remember that day – it was raining – when mom and dad brought you home from the hospital.
I hated you.
I was four years old, and more concerned about how many presents you were getting. I didn’t know then how I would grow to know and love you. All I knew was that you got more attention than I did, and I couldn’t stand it. I hated how all you did was sleep, and you were no fun to play with.
Every adult who came over cooed over your adorable blonde hair – when my hair was the exact same colour. They noted how your brilliant blue eyes were exactly like dad’s – but so were mine. I was always the one who was ignored. But soon, I knew that I was falling in love with your eyes, your smile, and your laugh.
Sometimes it seems like there’s more than 4 years between us. Usually it feels like you’re about 6 years older than me. You always were wiser, more mature, and more independent. I was the one who cried on your shoulder after mom and dad divorced. You’re the strong one.
I never will understand how you loved all that outdoorsy, nature stuff that I hate. Camping, hiking, sports, you name it you’re good at it. I’ll also never understand where you got your natural talent for math. The rest of the family can’t stand math – so what happened to you?
You probably don’t know how much I look up to you…but I do. You’re the one who can make me laugh, can cheer me up, and you’re the best listener that I know. Yes, we fight almost all the time, and it probably doesn’t seem like it, but I love you more than anything in the world. And I would do anything for you. Believe me.
You’ll never understand why I had to do what I did – and I’ll probably never get to explain it to you. But please believe me when I say that there was no choice, and it was the hardest one I’ve ever had to make. If there had been any other option, I would have taken it.
Don’t forget that you’re my baby brother, and you always will be. I’d travel to the ends of the earth and back for you – and I would always come find you. No matter what stands in my way, nothing will stop me from getting to you.
Love and Hugs,
Claire
What do I know about me?
Basically, I’m your all-around average guy.
Tall and too skinny for my age.
Boring brown hair and brown eyes.
I have three siblings that drive me crazy,
Oliver, Gwendolyn, and Rhea.
(I guess our parents have a thing for weird names.)
People seem to like me.
I don’t know why, but I’ve always been popular.
If they knew half the things about me,
They’d be gone before I could blink.
I’m 16 years old, 16 years that have taught me well.
My best qualities are:
My knack for storytelling,
My energy, and my confidence.
And my worst quality?
I don’t have just one.
I’m impatient, impulsive, and a daredevil.
I’m terrified of water –
But don’t tell anyone.
I have a quick temper.
I’ve made choices that I regret.
My biggest regret is what I did to Jude,
The way I treated him and destroyed who he was.
But I don’t regret my relationship with Alicia.
Those were 2 years that I wouldn’t take back for the world.
I don’t know where I’ll be after high school.
Hopefully playing football somewhere, or travelling the world.
I know that I want to get married and have kids, at least 3 or 4.
The things you should know about me:
I’m the class clown, and I love puns.
I’m a dog person, 100%.
Don’t try and make me read a book,
Because I won’t, believe me.
I don’t give a **** about clothes or fashion.
I can solve a Rubik’s Cube in less than 2 minutes.
If you want to piss me off, call me by my full name.
What else is there to tell you about me?
I’m just one kid against the world,
Struggling to:
Break free from stereotypes,
Fight for the cause,
Believe in the power of miracles and a little hard work,
Find that one girl, who’s perfect for me,
Raise my voice,
Carve my own path,
Never lose who I am,
And make my mark on the world.
I’m not giving up just yet,
Finn