Ned. Wrote a short story.

Yep.

Its for a contest but I'd love to get your opinions on it.

I'm going to be posting it on OSAAWAKMS later and updating this post around that time to.

Right now though my sister is bombarding me trying to get me off the computer.

So I gotta go.

Bye!

Ned.

EDIT.

Alright, lol. I'm back.

SO- I thought I'd give you a heads up. I'm posting the short story now. Please help me with grammar and let me know if you like it?

Also- There are some journal entries- you don't get to read all of them. Lol. It goes from one to seven. I only tell you because it confused both people who've read it previously. Which leads me to my biggest question, how can I make sure people don't think they skipped pages?

Thanks

-Ned.