Well, I decided to edit the other prologue I posted to see if it's any better than the original, so I did some changes and fix-upers, and I'm using it instead of my original one(: I actually really like how it's turned out, and I would to know what you guys think. It's up here:
http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/chapter.asp?chapter_ID=47379
And I just stubbed my toe and it's made me get a really bad taste in my mouth... :|?
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