Kas: I need your help!

Hey guys,
Today during fifth hour, i started re-writing ch 1 so that it fit better with my new plot. :D

Only im not sure if i like the first one better than this new one. I need some opinions before i keep writing it, because i dont want to finish it and then decide i like the first better...

This is the first.

http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/chapter.asp?chapter_ID=34597

And heres the new one. Its not finished, its about half done, but i really need some opinions on what you guys like.

http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/chapter.asp?chapter_ID=38432

Okay, tell me what you think.
-K