So, i think i've finally finished the first chapter. After taking about a month to edit it, im pretty sure its done, or at least very close. I had Maiah read it about a week ago, and she said she liked it. But she thought it was a bit too short. So, when she read it, it was around 1,700- 2,000 words long. Now, at the final count, it is 4,050 words long! thats about 2,000 words longer than it was. So hopefully its better now, Maiah you'll probably be the only one who can tell me if its gotten better, cause im not sure if anyone else read the other version. But, i would really love it if you guys could read it and tell me what you think!
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Here's the WOP link:
http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/chapter.asp?chapter_ID=38432
-K
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