So ya, im giving out reviews to whomever wants it. Be forewarned it isnt a soft - Oh my God I loved it! Comment.
I remember once giving someone a 15 paragraph rant. Which quite frankly didnt get the author mad at me...
I've only enraged 4 people XD
Anyways i dont critize, i help. Point out flaws and I also point out your unique aspects- what is realy working ect.
So if you want me to leave a comment with the link to the exact chapter.
Also it would be common courtesy if you could comment on mine afterwards.
-Regards Dustin
You forgot your name in the heading... I'll fix it. ;)
ReplyDeleteI'll check out yours now(:, I'm always looking for constructive criticism.
ReplyDeleteYou could o mine too, however, it'd probably be more worth it once I actually get the first chapter up, instead of my short prologue. Ahaha, I'll let you know. :)
ReplyDeleteMore like, who doesn't want a review?
ReplyDeleteHahaha. I would say i want one... but you already reviewed mine so... yeah. Haha.
I still need to read yours though, so ill do that soon. :D
-K
Woops my bad Heather, and NGR what is your story??
ReplyDeleteAhahahah, :D
ReplyDeleteOh, and NGR is Nicole.
ReplyDeleteI know, it's a lot of names. I was confused at first... and there were only eight of us when I joined.
;)
I commented on it with the story(:
ReplyDeleteHer story is Blood Red Rose..right =/ Im like just hacking through files trying to figure out..LOL
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry if I sounded harsh at all, but I truly did like your story. You have a wonderful way with words.
ReplyDeleteRead my message Nicole. No you didnt sound harsh - in comparrision to what i am going to say about yours. If yours was harsh mine is ranting XD
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